咖啡产量消费量与利润分配Coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution
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四个维度等权计分，均值 8.25，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
三图均有清楚概述和完整准确的支持数字，生产倍数及消费和利润排名恰当，未加入图外原因。
档位依据：任务要求完整准确且恰当满足，达到9档。
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coffee consumption is dominated by Europe and America
正确总结80%的集中度。
which is precisely double Indonesia’s 22%
南非44%与印尼22%的比较准确。
- 题图证据
已看三饼图及图例：消费欧洲41%、美洲39%、日本8%、其他12%；生产南非44%、印尼22%、日本18%、越南16%；利润运输51%、零售24%、出口10%、生产15%。全部图例文字清楚，按图示国家称谓核对。
改进建议
- 保持按题图图例及数据进行比较，无须增加外部行业解释。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
概述后一段处理消费与生产，另一段处理利润，连接清楚，读者可顺畅跟随；分图提示较显式。
档位依据：组织良好、指代清晰达到8档；衔接方式可更灵活以达到9档自然连贯。
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On the production side
从消费清楚转向生产。
Regarding profit distribution in the coffee industry
引出第三图主题明确。
改进建议
- 可直接用South Africa开句，减少一个图表层面的转题提示。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
dominated、concentrated、output、contributes及distribution运用准确，份额和倍数搭配自然。
档位依据：词汇范围和准确性符合8档；striking/substantial等评价词稍泛，未充分达到9档精确性。
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South Africa contributes a striking 44% of the global coffee output
产出和贡献搭配正确。
the delivery companies claim the major share
利润分配措辞清楚。
改进建议
- 可用the largest share替代major share，进一步明确排名。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
长并列、while对照、关系从句、respectively和被动概述准确，标点与数值对应稳定。
档位依据：结构丰富且绝大多数句准确，达到8档；全篇复杂结构变化仍可扩展至9档。
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while Japan has the smallest share at 8%, and the rest of the world makes up the remaining 12%
对照及剩余份额并列正确。
producers and exporters receive 15% and 10% respectively
并列主体与百分比对应清楚。
改进建议
- 可将消费两大市场合并为Together, Europe and America account for 80%，变化句型并加强概括。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
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The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The three pie charts illustrate global coffee production by country, coffee consumption by region, and the distribution of profits across various segments of the coffee industry.
Overall, coffee consumption is dominated by Europe and America, production is heavily concentrated in South Africa, and the largest share of profits goes to the delivery sector.
In terms of global coffee consumption, Europe accounts for the largest share at around 41%, closely followed by America at 39%, while Japan has the smallest share at 8%, and the rest of the world makes up the remaining 12%. On the production side, South Africa contributes a striking 44% of the global coffee output, which is precisely double Indonesia’s 22%. Japan and Vietnam also produce substantial amounts, at 18% and 16% respectively.
Regarding profit distribution in the coffee industry, the delivery companies claim the major share with 51% of the profits. Retailers earn about 24%, while producers and exporters receive 15% and 10% respectively.
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