增设旅游设施前后的岛屿Island before and after tourist facilities
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任务完成度 TA7 / 9
概述开发与远东部未变清楚，主要设施和相对位置均覆盖；细节主要顺次罗列，未清晰区分车道与步道体系，也未突出原有树木保留这一对照。
档位依据：清晰概述和主要特征支持7档；选择及比较尚可更充分精确以达8档。
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the island was transformed from an undeveloped area into one containing numerous tourist facilities
准确概括整体变化。
a road was built with a reception building beside it
表达过宽，图中车道环绕接待处且与步道区分。
- 题图证据
已看前后地图：原有西端沙滩及树木；后图新增西侧6间与中东9间住宿，步道通沙滩，车道连接中央接待处、北侧餐厅和南侧码头；最东端及多处树保留。比例尺100米。
改进建议
- 明确vehicle track与footpaths各自连接设施，并补充树木大体保留。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
先旧图后新图，空间顺序基本易跟随；新图段依靠left/right/above/below逐项列出，长段内部缺少设施分组。
档位依据：顺序清楚达到7档；段内关系和信息分组可优化至8档。
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The first map shows that the island has only one beach
基准状态明确。
On the right side of the island, another ring of huts was constructed
空间移动清楚但与前设施联系较弱。
改进建议
- 将交通与公共设施归一组，两簇住宿及海滩归另一组。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
amenities、infrastructure、bungalows、jetty等词汇有范围，整体易懂；barren略过强，road/path没有采用图例更精确称谓。
档位依据：足够灵活的地图词汇达到7档；局部词义宽泛限制8档。
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it is barren except for a few trees scattered around it
描述未开发土地时barren语义过强。
a jetty below it that allows boats to dock
码头用途表达准确自然。
改进建议
- 使用undeveloped及vehicle track，使土地和路线称谓更贴图。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
被动句、关系从句、目的不定式与except结构准确，复杂句整体易读，标点稳定。
档位依据：多样准确结构支持8档；开头倒装等略显刻意，未充分展现9档自然灵活。
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Given are two maps depicting an island
语法可成立但较生硬的倒装。
a path was constructed to allow tourists to go swimming at the beach
被动及目的结构准确。
改进建议
- 开头直接用The maps show，保留正文准确的复杂句。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
书内教学题；未根据题面相似性升级为已核实实考题；题目出版来源与作者范文分开。
The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Given are two maps depicting an island before and after the building of tourist amenities. Overall, the island was transformed from an undeveloped area into one containing numerous tourist facilities, except on the far-right side of the island.
The first map shows that the island has only one beach on the left-hand side and it is barren except for a few trees scattered around it. The island is about 250 metres long and about 75 metres wide with no man-made features.
The second map illustrates new tourist infrastructure on the island. On the left-hand side of the map, a path was constructed to allow tourists to go swimming at the beach. This path is connected to a ring of bungalows. To the right of this path, a road was built with a reception building beside it. The road leads to a restaurant above the reception and a jetty below it that allows boats to dock. On the right side of the island, another ring of huts was constructed and connected by a path. The far-right remains untouched.
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