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科学的首要目标是改善生活吗Should Science Focus on Improving Lives?

Task 2 · 来源范文同意或不同意科技与科学294 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务回应 TR7 / 9

立场明确,医疗和技术例子相关;主要证明科学已经改善生活,对为何这应优先于其他目标的规范性理由较薄,人工智能例子只点名。

档位依据:7档回应及支持成立;8档需更直接论证目标的优先性。

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  • this should continue into the future

    从历史收益直接推未来目标。

  • scientists should keep this in mind as they push forward with the creation of AI.

    新领域仅作点名。

改进建议

  • 解释如何以人类福祉判断研究优先次序或约束技术用途。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

医疗、其他技术和总结顺序清楚,承认逐利或监控的让步自然;improve people’s lives多次重复。

档位依据:8档结构顺畅;9档需更紧凑发展。

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  • Beyond that, there are of course many other ways

    过渡到科技作用清楚。

  • Not all technology is beneficial

    对前述益处作限定。

改进建议

  • 用具体社会结果替代重复改善生活的概括。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

profiteering、altruistic、take it for granted和lofty aims自然,有较广资源;amazing things等地方笼统。

档位依据:广泛灵活词汇符合8档;9档需具体精确。

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  • greed and profiteering by the pharmaceutical industry

    评价词语适切。

  • do amazing things

    残障人士获益描述过泛。

改进建议

  • 点明辅助沟通或独立工作等具体能力。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

让步、宾语、关系从句和反事实情态结构准确,复杂句控制稳定。

档位依据:结构范围与充分控制符合9档。

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  • that they would otherwise have struggled to achieve

    反事实完成情态准确。

  • its development should be fostered with such lofty aims

    被动情态结构准确。

改进建议

  • 保持反事实和让步句的清晰控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often said that the primary purpose of science should be to improve people’s lives. This essay will largely agree with that assertion. Science has advanced for many reasons throughout human history but it seems as though much of its relentless drive forwards has been powered by the quest to improve people’s lives. Take medicine as the best example. Although people complain about greed and profiteering by the pharmaceutical industry, there is no doubt that most medical advances have been made in order to reduce human suffering, improve people’s quality of life, and even extend lives so that people can live relatively comfortably into old age. From insulin to eyeglasses, medical science has sought to eliminate health problems and improve people’s lives and this should continue into the future. Beyond that, there are of course many other ways that science has helped people. It is easy to take it for granted, but the development of technology has mostly been for this purpose as well. Some rightly complain about governments spying and businesses profiting, but devices like laptops and tablets have certainly helped people. They allow average people to start businesses and they allow disabled people to do amazing things that they would otherwise have struggled to achieve. Not all technology is beneficial and not all of it is created for such altruistic purposes, but much of it is and its development should be fostered with such lofty aims. For example, scientists should keep this in mind as they push forward with the creation of AI. In conclusion, there are many reasons why science advances but mostly it is for the benefit of human beings and that should remain its aim. People should continue to make developments with the intention of improving people’s lives.
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