为社区园艺日寻求赞助Community gardening day sponsorship
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 8.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
活动、支持请求和商家收益充分明确,数量与借还安排切实,宣传方式具体,条件和答复期限适当。
档位依据:全部要求充分相关且恰当满足,符合9档。
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lend us twelve hand tools and donate six bags of compost
支持内容可执行。
place your business name on the event noticeboard
商家收益明确。
改进建议
- 保持支持数量、责任安排与宣传回报的具体性。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
活动目标、资源需求、回报和协商依次展开,条件分支与借还时间清楚,衔接自然。
档位依据:段落及连接熟练,达到9档。
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In recognition of your support
自然引出商家回报。
whether you could provide all or part of this support
回指需求并给出协商空间。
改进建议
- 维持请求、回报与协商安排的清楚顺序。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
neglected beds、compost、supervise和in recognition of准确,园艺及合作语汇丰富;public shop leaflet搭配略生硬,后续贡献措辞稍显重复。
档位依据:广泛准确资源达到8档;9档仍需个别表述更自然。
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plant herbs and flowers in the neglected beds
园艺词汇准确。
your public shop leaflet
public在此不够自然,可直接说宣传册。
改进建议
- 用shop brochure或promotional leaflet表达商店宣传册。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
关系、条件、非谓语和间接问句准确,情态句适配待协商安排,长句与列举控制稳定。
档位依据:语法范围和充分控制符合9档。
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which is organising a free community gardening day
非限定关系从句准确。
provided you are happy to supply copies
条件表达自然。
改进建议
- 保持条件句与礼貌协商中的准确语法。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
You are organising a community event and would like a local business to support it. Write a letter explaining the event, describing the support you need, and explaining how the business would benefit.
Dear Ms Grant,
I am writing on behalf of the Brookton Residents' Group, which is organising a free community gardening day on Saturday 16 May in Riverside Park. The event will bring local families together to plant herbs and flowers in the neglected beds beside the playground.
We expect approximately sixty volunteers during the day and would be grateful if Grant Garden Supplies could lend us twelve hand tools and donate six bags of compost. Group leaders will supervise their use, record each borrowed item and return the cleaned tools to your shop on Monday morning. We can collect everything on the Friday afternoon if that is convenient.
In recognition of your support, we would place your business name on the event noticeboard and thank the shop in our follow-up newsletter. Volunteers who want to continue gardening would also receive your public shop leaflet, provided you are happy to supply copies. We would describe the contribution accurately and would not share volunteers' contact details.
Please let me know by 30 April whether you could provide all or part of this support, and whether you have any conditions for borrowing the tools. I would be pleased to visit the shop to discuss the arrangements. Thank you for considering our request.
Yours sincerely,
Alex Morgan
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