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博物馆访客与满意度Visitors to the Ashdown Museum and how satisfied they were

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括文化与媒体192 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

完整准确覆盖人数变化、总体满意度改善及五类比例;有增加18000、非常满意翻倍以上及原先不满合计一半的有效比较,全部要求充分满足。

档位依据:任务选择、准确性、比较及概述均满足9档,无实质内容遗漏。

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  • that number increased sharply by 18,000 and reached ninety-two thousand

    人数及增量准确。

  • 40% of visitors were dissatisfied, and 10% were very dissatisfied, which together made up half of all responses

    准确合并负面反馈并突出规模。

  • 题图证据

    已查看表与两饼图:人数74000至92000;非常满意15至35、满意30至40、不满意40至15、非常不满意10至5、未回答5至5,均为百分比。

改进建议

  • 可进一步合并前后满意总比例45%和75%,使现有完整信息更简练。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

先概述双重改善,再分别讲人数和满意度,逻辑易跟随;对比、同时变化及不变项衔接自然。

档位依据:符合8档良好组织;末段较长且逐项报告较多,尚非9档高度娴熟的分组。

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  • Looking at visitor satisfaction data, there was a dramatic positive shift after refurbishment.

    明确从人数转入满意度。

  • The percentage of non-respondents remained constant at 5%.

    以不变项收束对比。

改进建议

  • 将满意和不满意分别成组比较,压缩逐项列举。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

renovation、refurbishment、substantial improvement等范围充分;survey result denoting和ratio of satisfied visitors不够自然精确。

档位依据:有灵活表达,符合7档;若达8档需更稳定地选用自然的数据搭配。

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  • a survey result denoting how satisfied the visitors were

    denoting搭配笨重,results showing更自然。

  • the proportion of very satisfied visitors more than doubled

    准确表达比例变化与倍数。

改进建议

  • 用survey results showing及proportion替换不自然的denoting、ratio搭配。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

并列、让步式对照、关系从句及not only结构均控制良好,多数句子准确。

档位依据:符合8档宽泛而准确的句式;长段中重复的百分比主句模式使灵活性尚未充分达到9档。

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  • the museum not only received significantly more visitors but also saw a substantial improvement

    并列谓语结构准确。

  • rising to 35%, while the ratio of satisfied visitors also grew to 40%

    分词与while结构连接准确。

改进建议

  • 在保持准确性的同时用前后合计值的比较句减少重复主句模式。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 345 – Visitors to the Ashdown Museum and how satisfied they were
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The table presents the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum in the year before and the year after its renovation, while the pie charts illustrate a survey result denoting how satisfied the visitors were in each of those years. Overall, after the refurbishment, the museum not only received significantly more visitors but also saw a substantial improvement in visitor satisfaction. In detail, before the Ashdown Museum’s renovation, exactly seventy-four thousand people visited the museum. In the year after the refurbishment, that number increased sharply by 18,000 and reached ninety-two thousand. Looking at visitor satisfaction data, there was a dramatic positive shift after refurbishment. In the year before, 40% of visitors were dissatisfied, and 10% were very dissatisfied, which together made up half of all responses. Only 15% said they were very satisfied, and 30% were satisfied. In contrast, after the refurbishment, the proportion of very satisfied visitors more than doubled, rising to 35%, while the ratio of satisfied visitors also grew to 40%. Meanwhile, the ratio of dissatisfied visitors fell sharply to 15%, and those who were very dissatisfied dropped to just 5%. The percentage of non-respondents remained constant at 5%.
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