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迈阿密和佛罗里达健身俱乐部会员Members in Miami and Florida health club

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括健康与生活233 词AI 估评 7 分
AI 估评 7 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 6.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA6 / 9

男女数量及夏季高峰、主要年龄份额有数据支持;将俱乐部使用人数反复改成多家健身房总会员数和留存量,且六月至九月实际高位相近,并非这期间快速增长。

档位依据:相关概述及数字满足6档;指标和阶段解释不够准确,未达7档。

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  • The membership count to these gyms and health centres remained almost the same till April

    原题是俱乐部使用人数,不能推出多家机构会员总数。

  • increased rapidly between June and September

    六月至九月大体高位稳定,主要上升出现在此前。

  • 题图证据

    已查看每月柱图:男性均高于女性;1月约570/500,6月约860/710,8至9月约840/730,12月约610/520;6至9月为高位,秋冬下降。

  • 题图证据

    已查看年龄饼图:男性21至45岁55、65岁以上25、其他20%;女性50、31、19%。

改进建议

  • 统一描述monthly users,说明春季上升、夏季平台,并避免推断会员留存。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

月度变化与年龄分布分段明确,概述结合两图;同段多次重申男性更多,they/their个别指代泛泛。

档位依据:组织与推进符合7档;重复和指代精度使其未达8档。

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  • The number of male health club members had always been higher than that of females.

    重复已给出的性别差异。

  • According to the pie charts

    清楚转入年龄资料。

改进建议

  • 男女总差异只概括一次,细节突出高峰与低谷。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

counterparts、retained、accounted for等范围足够,但ratio、membership count和participants混用,量词表达不够稳定。

档位依据:有一定灵活性,符合7档;指标相关用词和搭配尚未达到8档精确程度。

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  • outline the ratio of these members based on their gender and age

    ratio泛指比例,不如age distribution精确。

  • their male counterparts were slightly higher in number

    能自然避免重复男性会员。

改进建议

  • 用monthly use和age distribution区分两套指标。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

关系从句、比较和被动表达基本准确;between与to搭配重复错误,one-quarter后漏of。

档位依据:无误句频繁且复杂结构可用,符合7档;持续的小语法错误限制8档。

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  • between 21 to 45 years old

    应为between 21 and 45。

  • accounted for one-quarter participants

    应为one-quarter of participants。

改进建议

  • 统一改为between…and…,补齐分数后of。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Health club use in Miami and Florida in 2017
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 315 – Members in Miami and Florida health club
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 315 – Members in Miami and Florida health club
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The illustrations give the number of full-time male and female health-centre members in Miami and Florida throughout the year 2017, and outline the ratio of these members based on their gender and age. Overall, more males were active health centre members than females, and just over half of all of them were between 21 to 45 years old. As the bar chart implies, 500 females were active members of different fitness clubs in Florida and Miami in January 2017, while their male counterparts were slightly higher in number. The membership count to these gyms and health centres remained almost the same till April, but afterwards, increased rapidly between June and September. During this period, fitness centres in these two areas had more than 800 active male participants and slightly over 700 female members. The number of male health club members had always been higher than that of females. From October until the end of the year, these clubs retained a smaller number of members, and their number varied from 500 to 700. According to the pie charts, more than half of the male members of these fitness clubs were between 21 to 45 years old, while this was exactly 50% for women. Men over 65 years old accounted for one-quarter participants, while it was 6% higher in the case of females. The remaining one-fifth of fitness club members were from other age groups.
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