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某国出口类别在2015至2016年的变化One country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括工作与经济230 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

两份资料结合良好,五类别、总体增减和最大值完整,主要数字与增长率正确;农业0.81%未给出,纺织末值近似略低。

档位依据:充分主次选择符合8档;少量数值粗略与遗漏使其未到9档。

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  • export values rose in four out of the five sectors, while only the gems and jewellery category experienced a decline

    概述全部增长方向准确。

  • achieving the highest rate of increase at over 15%

    正确突出纺织最大增速。

  • 题图证据

    已查看柱图:石油约61至63、工程58至62、珠宝43至41、农业31至32、纺织27至约32,单位十亿美元。

  • 题图证据

    已查看增长表:石油+3%、工程+8.5%、珠宝-5.18%、农业+0.81%、纺织+15.24%。

改进建议

  • 补农业0.81%,纺织末值写约32十亿美元,并直接比较其追平农业。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

先概述后按类别比较,关系清楚;结尾再次总结相同的主导类别与纺织增长,长细节段和重复结论降低紧凑性。

档位依据:逻辑推进符合7档;重复与段落功能重叠限制8档。

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  • The data illustrate that while established export categories continued to dominate in value

    与概述主导类别重复。

  • Meanwhile, the gems and jewellery sector decreased

    转到唯一下降项清楚。

改进建议

  • 删除重复末段,把高出口额和低出口额类别分组。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

dominant、marginal increase、highest rate等用词清楚,数值与增长术语灵活;export earnings近距离重复。

档位依据:范围和准确性支持8档;局部冗余未达9档自然精炼程度。

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  • only a marginal increase

    恰当表达农业微小增长。

  • from about $31 billion in export earnings to $32 billion in export earnings

    同一短句重复export earnings。

改进建议

  • 省去重复的in export earnings,统一金额单位。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

while让步、分词结果、并列比较等准确,时态一致,复杂句多数无误。

档位依据:广泛而准确结构符合8档;反复金额主句加分词说明仍可更灵活以接近9档。

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  • these figures increased to approximately $63 billion and $62 billion, respectively

    并列数值及respectively关系准确。

  • marking a percentage decline of just above 5%

    分词结构连接正确。

改进建议

  • 可用类别间增速比较句代替部分重复的变化加分词句。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Export Earnings (2015 -2016)
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 319 – One country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 319 – One country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016
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The bar graph and the table data present a comparison of export earnings in five product categories for a particular country between 2015 and 2016, and the percentage change in value for each category during that period. As is obvious, export values rose in four out of the five sectors, while only the gems and jewellery category experienced a decline. Although petroleum products and engineered goods remained the dominant export categories in both years, the textile sector recorded a substantial percentage growth. In 2015, the country generated roughly 61 billion dollars from petroleum exports and around $58 billion from engineered goods – the two highest earning categories. By 2016, these figures increased to approximately $63 billion and $62 billion, respectively, representing growth of about 3% for petroleum and 8.5% for engineered goods. In contrast, agricultural exports showed only a marginal increase from about $31 billion in export earnings to $32 billion in export earnings. The textiles category climbed from approximately $27 billion to about $31 billion, achieving the highest rate of increase at over 15%. Meanwhile, the gems and jewellery sector decreased from around $43 billion in 2015 to about $41 billion in 2016, marking a percentage decline of just above 5%. The data illustrate that while established export categories continued to dominate in value for this country during the given period, faster growth occurred in sectors such as textiles.
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