投诉受损书架Complaint about a damaged bookshelf
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
三个要点均完整具体,订单与型号便于定位,损坏和后果清楚,换货及备用退款要求可执行,正式语气恰当。
档位依据:全部要求充分满足,符合9档。
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12 March (order number 48215)
购买信息可定位。
a full refund, including the delivery fee
备用处理要求完整。
改进建议
- 保持具体描述损坏并明确处理方案的写法。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
订单、交付、损坏、处理要求逐步推进,运费背景与退款要求呼应,连接和回指自然,阅读毫不费力。
档位依据:段落组织和衔接充分达到9档。
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As a result, the bookshelf cannot be assembled safely.
从损坏自然推进至后果。
collect the damaged item at the same time
将取货与换货紧密联结。
改进建议
- 保持按事实、影响、补救安排推进的结构。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
家具零件、损坏、装配及售后词汇精确自然,能清楚区分cracked、scratch、replacement和refund,无明显搭配问题。
档位依据:任务范围内词汇运用全面灵活精确,符合9档。
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two of the shelves were cracked and one of the side panels had a large scratch
准确区分部件和损坏形态。
the original packaging
售后语境搭配自然。
改进建议
- 继续使用具体部件与损坏词,避免泛称broken替代所有情况。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
关系从句、原因和时间从句、被动及条件请求灵活准确,标点稳定,长短句配合任务功能。
档位依据:语法和标点充分受控,符合9档。
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which arrived damaged
关系从句精简准确。
If a replacement is not available, I would like a full refund
条件与委婉请求协调。
改进建议
- 维持当前条件句和复杂修饰语的清晰控制。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
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Task: You ordered a piece of furniture online, but it arrived damaged. Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
describe what you ordered and when
explain what was wrong with it
say what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a bookshelf I ordered from your website on 12 March (order number 48215), which arrived damaged.
The bookshelf is the white five-shelf model, and it was delivered on 18 March. I paid an additional fee for delivery to my door, as I live on the third floor and could not carry it up myself.
Unfortunately, when I opened the box, I found that two of the shelves were cracked and one of the side panels had a large scratch along its full length. As a result, the bookshelf cannot be assembled safely. I have kept all the parts and the original packaging, and I have taken photographs of the damage.
I would therefore be grateful if you could arrange for a replacement to be delivered as soon as possible and collect the damaged item at the same time. If a replacement is not available, I would like a full refund, including the delivery fee.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Daniel Novak
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