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也门与意大利的人口年龄结构Yemen and Italy age groups 2000 and 2050

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括家庭与社会209 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

两国两期各组数据准确,概述老龄化和初期国别差异清楚,预测语气正确;可进一步突出中间年龄组在两国的相反走势。

档位依据:充分准确覆盖达到8档;更鲜明地综合变化模式可接近9档。

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  • Italy had an older population than Yemen in 2000, and both populations are predicted to age

    概述符合四图。

  • those aged 15–59 are predicted to form the largest group at 46.2%

    末年最大组虽接近老年组,仍辨识正确。

  • 题图证据

    已看四饼图:也门2000年龄0—14/15—59/60+为50.1/46.3/3.6,2050为37/57.3/5.7;意大利2000为14.3/61.6/24.1,2050为11.5/46.2/42.3(%)。

改进建议

  • 概述补一句也门15—59岁份额上升、意大利下降。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

按年份分段,段内国家顺序一致,便于查找;Turning to重复、每组逐项列举使跨年对照需要读者回看。

档位依据:整体清楚达到7档;衔接和比较组织不够灵活,未达8档。

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  • Turning to the Italians

    清楚转国家,但连接方式较模板化。

  • Turning to the 2050 forecast, in Yemen

    重复转段提示,且地点短语堆叠。

改进建议

  • 可每国一段对照两期,直接呈现各年龄组变化。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

cohort、counterparts、forecast和anticipated等有范围;six times higher与almost double精确度稍弱,proportion/group重复较多。

档位依据:词汇范围充分达到7档;倍数措辞和重复仍限制8档。

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  • more than six times higher than their counterparts in Yemen

    更明确写more than six times the corresponding proportion。

  • the oldest cohort

    年龄群体名词使用准确。

改进建议

  • 用about 1.75 times its 2000 share代替almost double以提高精度。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

过去事实与未来预测时态区分稳定,关系从句、分词和年龄复合修饰准确,长句基本受控。

档位依据:范围广、绝大多数句准确,达到8档;部分前置短语累积不够自然,未达9档。

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  • Those aged 60 and over accounted for 24.1%, which was more than six times higher

    分词修饰和关系从句结构准确。

  • followed by forecasted figures of 37% for the youngest group and 5.7% for the oldest cohort

    过去分词承接与并列对应清楚。

改进建议

  • 减少句首连续介词短语,直接用Yemen’s largest group is expected...。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

书内教学题;未根据题面相似性升级为已核实实考题;题目出版来源与作者范文分开。

The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
原书题目与图表:Yemen and Italy age groups 2000 and 2050
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The four pie charts give the proportions of three different age groups in 2000, and a forecast for 2050 in Yemen and Italy. Overall, Italy had an older population than Yemen in 2000, and both populations are predicted to age in the future. In 2000, in Yemen, over half the population was aged 0-14, and 46.3% was aged from 15 to 59. The smallest proportion was the 60 and over cohort, at just 3.6%. Turning to the Italians, at 61.6% the 15-59-year-olds formed the largest group. Those aged 60 and over accounted for 24.1%, which was more than six times higher than their counterparts in Yemen. With 14.3% the youngest group had the smallest percentage. Turning to the 2050 forecast, in Yemen, the largest group is expected to be those aged 15-59 at 57.3%, followed by forecasted figures of 37% for the youngest group and 5.7% for the oldest cohort. In Italy, those aged 15–59 are predicted to form the largest group at 46.2% followed by the group aged 60 and over, at 42.3%, which is predicted to be almost double its proportion in 2000. The youngest group is anticipated to account for only 11.5% of the population.
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