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三种涂抹酱的消费变化Consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括健康与生活212 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

三条线的主要趋势、峰值和终点清楚,大多数数据准确;把低脂1996首次显示说成当时推出是图外推断,人造黄油平台未明确。

档位依据:关键特征充分覆盖符合8档;少量未经证实的引入时间及平台省略限制9档。

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  • reduced-fat spreads, introduced in the mid-1990s

    图只从1996开始记录,不能推出推出时间。

  • peaking at roughly 80g in 2001

    低脂峰值准确。

  • 题图证据

    已查看折线:黄油约142、160、100、70、60、50;人造黄油95、80、100、100、80、40;低脂只从1996标10,2001为80,2007为70。

改进建议

  • 用first recorded in 1996,并补人造黄油1991至1996稳定在100克。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

概述后先传统两种再低脂,顺序清楚;同段黄油切换人造黄油时they以及末段its/their不够一致。

档位依据:整体组织符合7档;个别指代及消费词重复限制8档。

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  • On the other hand, they ate roughly 98g of Margarine in 1981.

    they回指前面的an average person,转接略笨重。

  • From there, its usage accelerated sharply

    its与前面的复数spreads不一致。

改进建议

  • 以consumption of margarine和consumption of low-fat spreads作清楚主语。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

markedly、apex、surpassing等有范围;usage accelerated不如consumption rose精确,Margarine反复无必要大写。

档位依据:足够灵活且意义清楚符合7档;搭配及词形书写限制8档。

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  • After this apex

    能变化表达峰值,但peak更自然。

  • its usage accelerated sharply

    消耗水平上升不等同于增速加快。

改进建议

  • 用consumption rose sharply并统一margarine小写。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

让步、时间与分词结构基本准确;its指代复数名词、末句which连接稍生硬。

档位依据:正确复杂句频繁符合7档;局部指代和修饰控制未达8档。

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  • Low-fat and reduced spreads were not present on the graph until 1996, when their daily consumption was just 10 grams.

    时间关系从句和主谓一致正确。

  • From there, its usage accelerated sharply

    单数物主代词与复数对象不一致。

改进建议

  • 统一复数指代their,或直接以consumption作主语。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 300 – Consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007
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The line graph illustrates daily per-person consumption of three different spreads, namely butter, margarine, and low-fat spreads, in a country between 1981 and 2007. The per-person consumption is presented in the graph in grams. As the data suggest, the consumption of both butter and margarine declined markedly over the period, while reduced-fat spreads, introduced in the mid-1990s, rose sharply to become the most popular by 2007. In detail, an average person in this country consumed just over 140 grams of butter in 1981, and the intake rose to a peak of approximately 160 grams by 1986. After this apex, average butter consumption fell steadily, finally dropping to around 50g by 2007. On the other hand, they ate roughly 98g of Margarine in 1981. This consumption trend showed some moderate fluctuations throughout the 1980s and early 1990s. After 1996, the consumption of Margarine fell considerably, ending at about only 40g per person per day in 2007. Low-fat and reduced spreads were not present on the graph until 1996, when their daily consumption was just 10 grams. From there, its usage accelerated sharply, peaking at roughly 80g in 2001. Although there was a slight decline in the later years, by 2007 their consumption remained high, which was around 70g, surpassing both butter and margarine.
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