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警务预算及支出分配The table and charts give information on police budget

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括政府与公共事务236 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

两个资料都覆盖,来源最大项、地方税明显增长和用途变化清楚;304.7直接写304略粗略,概述可更突出薪资份额下降与技术上升。

档位依据:关键特征充分且大体准确符合8档;轻微数值省略和概述精度限制9档。

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  • Local taxes showed a more significant increase as a source of this budget

    正确突出最大来源增量。

  • salaries made up 75% of the total budget in 2017, but dropped to 69% in 2018

    份额变化准确。

  • 题图证据

    已查看表:中央175.5至177.8、地方税91.2至102.3、其他38至38.5,总额304.7至318.6百万英镑。

  • 题图证据

    已查看两饼图:薪资75%至69%、技术8%至14%、建筑交通17%不变。

改进建议

  • 直接保留304.7和318.6,并在概述提到资金向技术倾斜。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

引言、概述、来源和用途分段清楚,按两套指标组织便于阅读,衔接与指代稳定。

档位依据:充分恰当分段及清楚排序符合8档;局部重复背景说明尚非9档精炼管理。

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  • In 2017, the police in a particular area of Britain

    细节重复已在引言给出的背景。

  • Regarding how the budget money was spent

    清楚转入用途。

改进建议

  • 删去细节段重复地区背景,直接进入总额和来源变化。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

allocated、expenditure、funding等词汇适合预算;largest chunk偏口语,comparative report及budget money略冗长。

档位依据:灵活清楚表达达到7档;语域和搭配未稳定达到8档。

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  • the largest chunk coming from the national government

    chunk较口语,可改share。

  • The shares allocated to buildings and transport remained stable

    预算分配表达准确。

改进建议

  • 用largest share和budget allocation保持正式简洁的语域。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、过去被动、并列与分词结构准确,长句控制稳定。

档位依据:广泛准确句式支持8档;个别句叠加which稍笨重,未完全达到9档。

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  • which increased by roughly 14 million pounds during the next year

    关系从句准确解释增量。

  • money spent on technology nearly doubled, growing from 8% to 14%

    过去分词修饰和结果分词结构正确。

改进建议

  • 将来源段连续which结构简化为直接比较句。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Police Budget 2017-2018 (in £m) How the money was spent
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 335 – The table and charts give information on police budget
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 335 – The table and charts give information on police budget
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The table and pie charts present a comparative report about the police budget in a particular part of Britain for the years 2017 and 2018. The table breaks down the source of the money, while the pie charts show how the budget was allocated across salaries, technology, and buildings & transport. Overall, the total budget for the police rose slightly from 2017 to 2018, with the largest chunk coming from the national government in both years. On the spending side, salaries accounted for the majority of expenditure. In 2017, the police in a particular area of Britain had a total budget of 304 million pounds, which increased by roughly 14 million pounds during the next year. National government funding provided the biggest portion of this budget, which was over 175 million pounds in 2017, and approximately £178 million in 2018. Local taxes showed a more significant increase as a source of this budget, surging from £91 million to slightly over £102 million. Finally, sources like grants climbed from £38 million to £38.5 million in a year. Regarding how the budget money was spent, it is clear that officer and staff salaries made up 75% of the total budget in 2017, but dropped to 69% in 2018. Meanwhile, money spent on technology nearly doubled, growing from 8% to 14% during the same period. The shares allocated to buildings and transport remained stable at 17% in both years.
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