家庭支出比例Household spending
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四个维度等权计分，均值 8.75，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
全部份额、增减组别、首尾排名及交通被休闲超过准确，分数换算和下降幅度比较恰当，信息完整。
档位依据：所有要求充分恰当满足，达到9档。
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housing took the largest share of the budget in both years and its lead widened
主导地位及差距扩大准确。
it dropped from third place to fourth, behind leisure
交通排序变化准确。
- 题图证据
已看两饼图：2010住房38食物25交通18休闲12其他7%；2020对应45、20、12、15、8%。
改进建议
- 现有关键比较已完整，保持份额口径即可。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
按增加与减少分组，概述先给排名变化，段落间相对关系自然；数字与解释紧凑融合，阅读轻松。
档位依据：清楚且娴熟的分组、指代及推进达到9档。
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Three categories gained ground.
简短引导后具体说明增加组。
The remaining two categories moved the other way.
自然承接剩余类别，避免机械转换。
改进建议
- 保持这种按变化方向组织并补排名解释的方式。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
lead widened、gained ground、edged up、shrunk以及分数表达准确自然，范围内变化充分，未引入不当华丽词汇。
档位依据：任务范围内灵活、精确、自然的词汇控制达到9档。
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other items edged up from 7% to 8%
小幅上升词义精准。
from a quarter to a fifth of the budget
准确且自然地转换比例表达。
改进建议
- 继续确保份额与金额不混淆，保留当前精确搭配。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
比较、过去完成、分词、并列和插入结构准确，多数句无误；结构多集中于变化主句附加说明。
档位依据：广泛准确达到8档；顶档充分灵活的句法证据尚不足。
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by 2020 this had risen to 45%
过去完成时准确。
Food, the second-largest category in both years, fell from a quarter to a fifth
同位说明和主句关系清楚。
改进建议
- 可用一个直接跨类别比较句变化常用的变化加补充结构。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
GoPrep Writing course 原创练习数据与题目；网站说明为教学材料，非官方IELTS试题。
The two charts above show how a typical household in one city divided its monthly spending across five categories in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Category | 2010 | 2020
Housing | 38% | 45%
Food | 25% | 20%
Transport | 18% | 12%
Leisure | 12% | 15%
Other | 7% | 8%
The two pie charts compare how a typical household in one city divided its monthly spending among five categories in 2010 and 2020.
Overall, housing took the largest share of the budget in both years and its lead widened, while other items remained the smallest category. Food and transport accounted for a smaller proportion by 2020, and leisure moved ahead of transport.
Three categories gained ground. Housing already made up the biggest slice in 2010, at just under two fifths of all spending (38%), and by 2020 this had risen to 45%, close to half of the total. The share spent on leisure also grew, from 12% to 15%, while other items edged up from 7% to 8%.
The remaining two categories moved the other way. Food, the second-largest category in both years, fell from a quarter to a fifth of the budget. Transport shrank even more, from 18% to 12%, or roughly an eighth of spending, so it dropped from third place to fourth, behind leisure.
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