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新闻频道四个时段的收视情况Channel One news viewing by four time slots

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括文化与媒体254 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

概述突出18点大多领先、13点稳定及夏季两个晚间时段的相反变化。细节准确覆盖五月新节目、八月峰谷与年底走势,数值近似均与图一致。

档位依据:主要趋势、关键转折、量纲与比较完整准确,符合9分。

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  • for the majority of the period, view counts were the highest for the 6 p.m. broadcast

    多数时期的限定准确容纳八月23点更高的例外。

  • skyrocketed to a peak of 4 million in August

    23点线八月约4.1百万,近似报告准确。

  • 题图证据

    图1显示13点约1.2–1.4百万;18点从4.8降至3.3;21:30八月降到约1.1后恢复;23点注释为五月一日引入,八月最高、十二月约0.9。正文均准确。

改进建议

  • 保持对大多数时段这一限定及八月相反变化的突出说明。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

先概述再以13点与18点、21:30与23点两组展开,后组围绕夏季转折组织,读者能清楚跟随。Finally引入另一整条线略显列表化。

档位依据:全篇清楚连贯且分组有效,达到8分;两条晚间线仍主要分开描述,未达9分更自然的交织比较。

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  • Regarding the broadcasts at 1 p.m. and 6 p.m.

    建立稳定与下降的第一组比较。

  • Over the subsequent three months

    时间推进准确指向五月到八月。

改进建议

  • 把21:30的八月低点与23点的同期高点放在同一句直接对照。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

viewership、time slots、skyrocketed和steep decline提供足够且多样的描述。units are measured、9:30 p.m. watching及period of downward fluctuation不够地道,精确搭配有明显改进空间。

档位依据:词汇范围和意思表达符合7分;数处搭配不自然,尚未达到8分熟练灵活运用。

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  • The units are measured in millions of viewers per day.

    应说Figures are given in,units本身不被测量。

  • with the introduction of the 11 p.m. time slot, and 9:30 p.m. watching dropping temporarily.

    watching在此不如viewership或audience figures自然。

改进建议

  • 使用Figures are given in millions及viewership fell temporarily,避免把watching当作观众人数。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

复杂比较、关系从句、时间从句及分词结构大体准确。概述中的并列与末段多重分词连接略松散,但意义始终清楚。

档位依据:多数句子准确且复杂结构范围广,达到8分;少数并列与标点细节限制9分。

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  • whose figures skyrocketed to a peak of 4 million in August, after which they experienced a steep decline

    两个关系结构准确连接峰值与后续下降。

  • then rising more gradually finishing at 3 million by the end of the year.

    finishing前加逗号或and更清楚界定连续分词关系。

改进建议

  • 在连续分词结构间补足连接或标点,并使概述中的两个变化使用平行结构。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

公开教学题目;原图/考题来源与范文作者分开,具体考试日期未自行核实。

IELTS writing task: The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. Write a report of at least 150 words summarizing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS academic writing task 1 line graph sample TV news broadcast
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The line graph compares the viewership of Channel One news broadcasts at four different time slots throughout a year. The units are measured in millions of viewers per day. Overall, for the majority of the period, view counts were the highest for the 6 p.m. broadcast, lowest but most stable for the 1 p.m. There was also a seasonal change mainly in summer, with viewership trending later in the day with the introduction of the 11 p.m. time slot, and 9:30 p.m. watching dropping temporarily. Regarding the broadcasts at 1 p.m. and 6 p.m., the former had a consistent viewership at a little over a million. However, the 6 p.m. slot began the period at just under 5 million and then went into a period of downward fluctuation settling at just over 3 million in December. As for the remaining time slots, there were nearly three million people watching the news at 9:30 p.m. in January, which increased gradually to just under 4 million in May. Over the subsequent three months, the numbers dropped to a low of about 1 million, before recovering to 2.5 million in September and then rising more gradually finishing at 3 million by the end of the year. Finally, on May 1st, the TV station added a fourth time slot for 11 p.m., whose figures skyrocketed to a peak of 4 million in August, after which they experienced a steep decline to nearly a million in December.
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