因缺席生日晚餐向朋友道歉Unable to attend friend birthday dinner
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
缺席原因清楚,歉意具体顾及对方订位,替代庆祝有地点、日期选择和活动,语气亲密自然。
档位依据:全部要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。
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look after the children until Sunday morning
缺席原因具体。
Could I take you out for lunch the following weekend instead?
替代庆祝明确。
改进建议
- 保持歉意与具体补偿性安排相结合。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
原因、对朋友的影响、替代安排与祝福自然推进,instead和afterwards连接明确,重复歉意有关系维护功能。
档位依据:衔接自然、段落管理熟练,符合9档。
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so close to the day
连结临时变更与歉意。
We could go for a walk afterwards
活动次序自然。
改进建议
- 维持替代安排与前文歉意的自然联系。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
feel awful、proper catch-up、send my love和letting you down自然贴合朋友关系,具体照料与安排用词精确。
档位依据:充分灵活自然的习惯表达符合9档。
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have a proper catch-up
亲友间重聚表达自然。
Sorry again for letting you down.
歉意习惯表达适切。
改进建议
- 保持自然口语书信措辞,避免加入僵硬正式道歉套语。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
过去将来、关系从句、条件、选择从句和未来安排准确,句型变化流畅,标点稳定。
档位依据:广泛结构与充分控制符合9档。
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the person who was going to stay with her that evening is no longer available
时间关系和定语从句准确。
choose whichever works best for you.
自由选择从句准确自然。
改进建议
- 维持过去计划变化与未来替代方案的时态区分。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
You accepted an invitation to a friend’s celebration but can no longer attend. Write a letter to your friend. Explain why you cannot come, apologise, and suggest another way to celebrate together.
Dear Leo,
I'm really sorry, but I won't be able to come to your birthday dinner on Saturday after all. My sister has injured her ankle, and the person who was going to stay with her that evening is no longer available. I've offered to help her at home and look after the children until Sunday morning.
I know you've already booked a table for everyone, and I feel awful about changing my plans so close to the day. Please let me know if the restaurant needs you to confirm the number of guests again. I was really looking forward to seeing you and hearing about your new job, so I'm disappointed to miss it.
Could I take you out for lunch the following weekend instead? There's a new café near the river that I think you'd like. I'm free on either Saturday or Sunday, so choose whichever works best for you. We could go for a walk afterwards if the weather is good and have a proper catch-up.
Have a brilliant evening, and please send my love to everyone. I'll call you during the week to hear how it went. Sorry again for letting you down.
All the best,
Alex
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