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平板电脑对儿童的影响Tablets and Computers for Children

Task 2 · 来源范文利弊分析科技与科学257 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务回应 TR7 / 9

比较判断清楚,家长减压、机会成本和睡眠风险有说明;题干技术学习的好处只简短否定,适量与长时间使用的范围未充分区分。

档位依据:7档相关回应成立;8档需更精准处理主要益处和使用条件。

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  • Although they may learn some technological skills

    技术益处仅轻触。

  • looking at screens for long periods

    健康论证针对长时间。

改进建议

  • 比较有限、有指导的使用与无节制游戏,说明判断适用条件。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

优点、机会成本、健康及结论组织清楚;健康段it指代宽泛,结尾their紧邻parents,可能误指。

档位依据:7档清楚推进;8档需代词更明确。

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  • it can also have negative health impacts

    it指长时间使用但未明确。

  • While it may give parents more time, it could damage their mental and physical development.

    their容易指向parents而非儿童。

改进建议

  • 结论明确写children’s development。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

cognitive、technological skills等词汇基本足够,表达清楚;normal toys指称较泛,技术学习相关词汇变化有限。

档位依据:7档有一些精确性和变化;8档需更具体自然。

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  • creative, cognitive, and social skills

    技能类别明确。

  • playing with normal toys

    normal含混,应说明实体玩具。

改进建议

  • 用physical toys或construction toys等具体词。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

让步、关系、被动和倒装结构多数准确,复杂句有变化;健康段when looking的逻辑主语略含混。

档位依据:8档多数无误成立;9档需修饰和指代更稳。

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  • Of much more benefit is encouraging children

    倒装结构准确。

  • damage the eyes of a child when looking at screens

    when looking应明确由child执行。

改进建议

  • 改为when children look at screens明确从句主语。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
These days it is common to observe children spending significant amounts of time on electronic devices such as computers and tablets. In my opinion, the drawbacks of allowing children to do this outweigh any advantages. The benefit of this development is that it will keep children occupied. There is no doubt that raising children and taking care of them can be stressful at times for parents so allowing them to play on a device means that the parents can have a break and not have to continuously entertain them. This could potentially mean improved family relationships. However, there are several disadvantages. Firstly, children's free time can be better utilised with other activities. Although they may learn some technological skills, they mostly just play games, and in any case computer skills are now taught in school. Of much more benefit is encouraging children to spend their free time interacting with other children, playing with normal toys, and playing other games outside, which will foster their creative, cognitive, and social skills. In addition to this there is growing evidence that it can also have negative health impacts. Research reported in the media claims that it can possibly damage the eyes of a child when looking at screens for long periods. Studies also indicate children using these devices may have more difficulty sleeping, something which is crucial for mental development. In conclusion, the drawbacks of allowing children to use computers and tablets outweigh the benefits. While it may give parents more time, it could damage their mental and physical development.
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