塑料瓶回收Plastic bottles recycling
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任务完成度 TA8 / 9
阶段数、顺序、分选和回流准确,按三类功能分组清楚;未例举末端产品,且将专用回收箱泛称垃圾箱,细节精确性稍弱。
档位依据:充分覆盖主要过程达到8档;补产品例子并明确回收箱可更接近9档。
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there are nine steps starting with bottles being thrown in the trash
数量正确,但trash弱化了分类回收投放。
Some finished goods may end up being thrown out into trash cans and subsequently re-entering the recycling process.
图确有返回箭头,回流不是无据新增。
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已查看循环图九个编号;投放箱有回收标志,分选有勾叉;压块后粉碎落入清洗池,制粒加热制原料,末端有瓶、容器、衣服、袋、笔并返回收集箱。
改进建议
- 将trash cans改为recycling bins,并列举两类成品。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
三组功能段落清楚,先后顺序易跟随;This starts/This begins和Subsequently重复使用,衔接略机械。
档位依据:逻辑顺序和清晰段落满足7档;连接词重复及模板式转段限制8档灵活控制。
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This starts with plastic bottles being thrown into garbage bins.
重复概述起点,展开较机械。
Looking at the remaining stages
功能分组清楚,但转段提示较泛。
改进建议
- 减少一个Subsequently,以pellets或washed plastic承接前一步产物。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
compressing、grinder、pellets、raw material等技术词合适,动词有变化;garbage/trash反复泛化回收材料,精确性不足。
档位依据:足够范围并有工艺词支持7档;个别词义泛化和重复未到8档灵活准确。
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fed into a grinder that crushes them
机械操作搭配准确。
Next, garbage trucks collect these bins.
可更准确写收集箱内塑料瓶并运送。
改进建议
- 区分recyclable waste与general rubbish,明确运输对象。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
被动、分词、关系从句及whereupon连接均准确,长句可读,时态一致。
档位依据:语法范围与准确性符合8档;若干重复句框限制9档充分灵活。
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where they are sorted by hand into bottles that can be recycled and bottles that cannot
关系从句和并列省略准确。
raw material suitable for making plastic products
形容词后置和动名词结构自然。
改进建议
- 合并两处This begins/This starts句,用不同句式表达阶段转换。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The process diagram illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled. Overall, there are nine steps starting with bottles being thrown in the trash and ending with products being made from the recycled plastic, whereupon the process restarts.
The first three steps involve collecting and sorting the plastic bottles. This starts with plastic bottles being thrown into garbage bins. Next, garbage trucks collect these bins. Subsequently, the plastic bottles end up in a recycling centre where they are sorted by hand into bottles that can be recycled and bottles that cannot.
The next stages focus on preparing the recyclable plastic. This begins with compressing the recyclable plastic bottles together. These compressed blocks are then fed into a grinder that crushes them and transfers them into a tank where they are washed. Subsequently, plastic is put into a machine that transforms it into pellets.
Looking at the remaining stages, the plastic pellets are heated and turned into raw material suitable for making plastic products. After this, finished products are created from the raw material. Some finished goods may end up being thrown out into trash cans and subsequently re-entering the recycling process.
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