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澳大利亚城市的咖啡与茶消费习惯People’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Australian cities

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较城市与交通225 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

概述与三活动分类明确,五城覆盖充分且主要排序准确;墨尔本即溶约47%写成与悉尼都45%,fresh最低范围只说most不够明确,部分近似略粗。

档位依据:清楚主要特征和数据支持7档;数值与概括精度未稳定达到8档。

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  • buying fresh coffee was the least common choice in most locations

    实际五城全部最低,可明确all。

  • both at about 45%

    墨尔本即溶高于悉尼,图上约47%。

  • 题图证据

    已查看柱图,城市顺序悉尼、墨尔本、布里斯班、阿德莱德、霍巴特;新鲜约44/42/34/35/38%,即溶45/47/52/50/53%,咖啡馆61/63/55/49/62%。

改进建议

  • 突出新鲜咖啡在全部五城最低,并分别给出悉尼和墨尔本即溶数据。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

咖啡馆单段,再依次说明即溶和新鲜,跨城排名连贯,指代与对比自然。

档位依据:段落和信息排序符合8档;最后段同时承担两活动略长,精炼度尚非9档。

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  • When it comes to instant coffee

    明确进入第二活动。

  • Purchases of fresh coffee were noticeably lower across all five cities.

    从即溶自然转入共同较低活动。

改进建议

  • 将即溶与新鲜各成一段或合并相似城市,减少段落长度。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

dominate、led this category、mid-30% range等表达适合数据;rate of this trend和ratio措辞不够精确。

档位依据:有灵活表达达到7档;个别搭配限制8档流畅精确。

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  • Adelaide also had a relatively high rate of this trend

    单次调查不宜称trend,rate of this trend也不自然。

  • each sitting in the mid-30% range

    范围表达自然。

改进建议

  • 用proportion of residents purchasing instant coffee替代rate of this trend。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

关系从句、分词和比较结构多数准确;64% citizens漏of,highest proportions…54%单复数表达稍别扭。

档位依据:复杂句及频繁正确句支持7档;局部名词短语错误使其未达8档。

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  • almost 64% citizens in Melbourne

    应为64% of citizens。

  • where just over half of the population purchased this type of drink

    关系从句准确。

改进建议

  • 检查所有百分比后的人群名词结构,统一最高比例的单数表达。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 350 – People’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Australian cities
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The bar chart represents the proportions of residents in five Australian cities who bought fresh or instant coffee, or visited a café for coffee or tea during the previous four weeks. Overall, most Australians in those cities, except Adelaide, went to a café to enjoy tea or coffee, while buying fresh coffee was the least common choice in most locations. In detail, almost 64% citizens in Melbourne went to a café to enjoy tea or coffee. Hobart followed very closely, while this ratio in Sydney and Brisbane showed slightly lower but still strong participation, at roughly 60% and 55%, respectively. Adelaide was the only city where café visits did not dominate, standing at just under 50%. When it comes to instant coffee, the highest proportions of people (54%) buying it were recorded in Hobart, closely followed by Brisbane, where just over half of the population purchased this type of drink. Adelaide also had a relatively high rate of this trend, around 50%. In contrast, the proportion of people in Sydney and Melbourne who bought it stood at moderate levels, both at about 45%. Purchases of fresh coffee were noticeably lower across all five cities. Sydney and Melbourne led this category, with around 44% and 42% respectively. Hobart followed at approximately 38%, while Brisbane and Adelaide had the lowest figures, each sitting in the mid-30% range.
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