四座城市的房租与薪资Rent and salary in four cities
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
准确概括租金工资共同排序及负担不等,极值和南东两城反差有支持;东城金额与南城薪资未直接给出,个别比较可更充分。
档位依据:关键特征娴熟选择达到8档;中间城市数值支撑略少,未达9档。
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three times the figure for Westbrook
1800与600的倍数准确。
rent consumed 36% of income, more than in the wealthier city of Eastvale
正确说明低租金不保证低负担。
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已看表:Northam租1800薪4500占40%,Eastvale1200/4000/30%,Southport900/2500/36%,Westbrook600/2400/25%。
改进建议
- 补南城2500和东城4000的工资,让负担反差更可核对。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
先极值金额,再解释比例差异,最后南城例外,逻辑清楚;最后一句多个因果从句稍长。
档位依据:结构与衔接良好达到8档;长末句的信息负担限制9档轻松阅读。
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Salaries followed a similar pattern but the differences were smaller
连接租金和工资的比较自然。
Southport stands out, because although
转入例外明确,但连接层次叠加。
改进建议
- 把南城低工资和东城比较拆成两句。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
heaviest burden、ranging、consumed等自然表达比例负担,词汇精确;wealthier稍泛化为总财富。
档位依据:灵活准确达到8档;wealthier概念略宽,未达9档。
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the heaviest burden in Northam and the lightest in Westbrook
自然表达相对租金负担。
the wealthier city of Eastvale
数据只显示平均工资更高。
改进建议
- 将wealthier改为higher-salary以限定比较依据。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
比较、分词、让步和关系从句准确,结构变化充分;最后because although so层次稍繁。
档位依据:广泛且大多准确符合8档;复杂关系的精炼控制未完全达到9档。
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ranging from $4,500 in Northam to $2,400 in Westbrook
范围分词结构正确。
although its rent was relatively low at $900, salaries there were also low
让步主从关系正确。
改进建议
- 减少末句连续因果和让步连接,保留最直接的比较。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The table below shows the average monthly rent for a one-bedroom flat and the average monthly salary in four cities in 2022.
City | Rent | Salary | Rent as share of salary
Northam | $1,800 | $4,500 | 40%
Eastvale | $1,200 | $4,000 | 30%
Southport | $900 | $2,500 | 36%
Westbrook | $600 | $2,400 | 25%

The table gives information about typical rents and salaries in four cities in 2022, together with the proportion of a monthly salary that rent represented.
Overall, cities with higher salaries also had higher rents. However, rent did not take up the same share of income everywhere: it was the heaviest burden in Northam and the lightest in Westbrook.
Northam was the most expensive city, with an average rent of $1,800 a month, three times the figure for Westbrook, the cheapest, at $600. Salaries followed a similar pattern but the differences were smaller, ranging from $4,500 in Northam to $2,400 in Westbrook.
As a result, the share of salary spent on rent varied considerably. Tenants in Northam paid 40% of their income, compared with only a quarter in Westbrook. Southport stands out, because although its rent was relatively low at $900, salaries there were also low, so rent consumed 36% of income, more than in the wealthier city of Eastvale, where the figure was 30%.
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