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谁应减少商品包装Who Should Reduce Product Packaging?

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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务回应 TR7 / 9

双方和共享责任立场清楚,企业供给改变与消费者需求信号相关;环保材料和回收部分偏离减少包装数量,个人意见重复多于进一步比较责任。

档位依据:7档主要要求充分回应;8档需聚焦减量并比较责任能力。

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  • using eco-friendly materials and employing efficient packaging techniques

    前半谈材料替代,不一定减少包装量。

  • customers can be catalysts for positive change

    需求机制相关但结论偏泛。

改进建议

  • 给出取消多层包装或补充装实例,并解释企业与顾客控制权差异。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

双方分段清楚,意见段后又有总结段,两个结尾反复共同合作与可持续未来,推进冗长。

档位依据:7档清楚组织;8档需压缩重复。

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  • In my opinion, the responsibility to reduce packaging waste should be shared

    已作结论判断。

  • In conclusion, addressing the issue of excessive packaging requires a joint effort

    再度重申同一判断。

改进建议

  • 合并最后两段,把空间用于比较双方作用。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

supply chain、demand-driven、incentivize和conscious consumption准确,语体一致;positive change与sustainable future等表达反复且宽泛。

档位依据:8档广泛准确;9档需更具体精练。

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  • signal to manufacturers and retailers

    市场信号表达自然。

  • excessive packaging becomes a thing of the past

    习惯表达自然但结果夸大。

改进建议

  • 用包装重量或材料层数等具体结果替代宏大概括。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

让步、关系、原因及非谓语结构准确,长句与并列控制稳定,标点自然。

档位依据:广泛结构和充分控制符合9档。

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  • When consumers actively choose products with minimal or recyclable packaging

    时间条件从句准确。

  • where excessive packaging becomes a thing of the past

    关系从句自然。

改进建议

  • 保持复杂关系和条件结构的准确性。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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Some people say that manufacturers and supermarkets should take the responsibility of reducing the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should take responsibility and avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's world, the issue of excessive packaging of consumer products has become a subject of debate as most of the packaging uses non-biodegradable plastics that harm the environment. Some argue that manufacturers and supermarkets should bear the responsibility of reducing packaging, while others believe that customers should play a more active role in avoiding products with excessive packaging. This essay will discuss both perspectives and assert that while manufacturers and supermarkets should take the initiative to reduce packaging, customers' choices can also play a significant role in promoting sustainability. On the one hand, many believe that the burden of reducing packaging should lie with manufacturers and supermarkets. As key players in the supply chain, they can implement changes that can lead to significant reductions in packaging waste. By adopting sustainable practices, such as using eco-friendly materials and employing efficient packaging techniques, they can minimize the environmental impact caused by excessive packaging. For instance, in recent years, some leading supermarkets have made significant strides in reducing single-use plastics and implementing recycling programmes, demonstrating that they are capable of driving positive change. On the other hand, others think that customers possess considerable power to influence packaging practices through their purchasing decisions. When consumers actively choose products with minimal or recyclable packaging, they signal to manufacturers and retailers that they value sustainability and environmental consciousness. This demand-driven approach can incentivize companies to rethink their packaging strategies and make eco-friendly choices. By embracing a culture of conscious consumption, customers can be catalysts for positive change in the market. In my opinion, the responsibility to reduce packaging waste should be shared by manufacturers, supermarkets and customers. While manufacturers should prioritize sustainable practices, customers can exert influence through their preferences. By working together, these stakeholders can create a more sustainable future, where excessive packaging becomes a thing of the past, and responsible consumption becomes the norm. In conclusion, addressing the issue of excessive packaging requires a joint effort from manufacturers, supermarkets, and customers alike. By collaborating, we can make meaningful progress towards a more sustainable and eco-conscious society.
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