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投诉有故障的家电Letter of complaint about a faulty appliance

Task 1 · General Training投诉/问题处理工作与经济242 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

商品故障、到店经历和解决要求充分具体,语气正式且坚定;题干说退回电器,正文只明确带凭证到店,实物退回状况不够清楚。

档位依据:充分回应8档成立;9档需更准确交代实际退货或检修交接。

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  • I returned to the branch on 5 September with the receipt and the warranty card.

    说明到店但未明确电器是否交还。

  • If a replacement is not possible, I would accept a full refund.

    补救方案明确。

改进建议

  • 明确洗衣机是否已交回店方,以及目前由谁保管。

连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9

按购买故障、首次报修、再次到店和要求解决推进,日期清楚,因果与条件连接自然,段落职责明确。

档位依据:时间线和衔接熟练,达到9档。

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  • No contact was made. When I visited again on 11 September

    短句接第二次到店,推进有力。

  • As the fault appeared well within the warranty period

    要求与保修事实紧密相连。

改进建议

  • 维持日期和处理结果逐步推进的结构。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

drum、warranty、referred和resolution准确专业,正式投诉措辞灵活;raise a complaint及front loading的写法略可更自然规范。

档位依据:广泛精确资源符合8档;9档尚需少量搭配和词形细节完善。

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  • leaving the drum locked and full of water

    故障后果词汇具体。

  • raise a complaint

    可更自然地用make或lodge a complaint。

改进建议

  • 用lodge a complaint,并规范front-loading等复合词。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

被动报告、时间从句、请求中的虚拟结构及非限定关系从句灵活准确,长句层次清楚。

档位依据:语法范围和控制符合9档。

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  • I would ask that the machine be replaced rather than repaired

    请求中的结构准确。

  • after which I would have no option but to refer the matter

    关系衔接与不定式结构自然。

改进建议

  • 保持复杂正式请求中的准确控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

页面原创练习题;非正式考题

You recently bought a household appliance which stopped working within a few weeks. You returned it to the shop but the problem has not been resolved. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. explain what you bought and what went wrong describe what happened when you returned it say what you want the shop to do
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to raise a complaint regarding a washing machine purchased from your Gulberg branch on 4 August, and to request a resolution after two unsuccessful visits to the shop. The appliance, a Haier front loading model, functioned normally for around three weeks. It then began to stop mid cycle and display an error code, leaving the drum locked and full of water. This has now happened on every attempt to use it, and the machine has been unusable since 2 September. I returned to the branch on 5 September with the receipt and the warranty card. The assistant on duty informed me that the matter would be referred to a technician and that I would be contacted within three working days. No contact was made. When I visited again on 11 September, I was told that no record of my first visit existed and that I would need to begin the process once more. As the fault appeared well within the warranty period, I would ask that the machine be replaced rather than repaired, given that it has already failed once. If a replacement is not possible, I would accept a full refund. I would be grateful for a written response within seven days, after which I would have no option but to refer the matter to the consumer court. I enclose copies of the receipt and warranty card for your reference. Yours faithfully, Imran Sheikh
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