学生是否应该做家庭作业Should Schoolchildren Have Homework?
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务回应 TR7 / 9
双方和个人意见明确,有压力情境和数学成绩例子;反对方例子很快转到不写作业影响成绩,未充分解释取消作业的益处,大量作业与减压条件未协调。
档位依据:7档主要要求覆盖;8档需更完整公平地发展反方并限定支持条件。
查看评分证据
If they fail to finish their assignments they may not do well in exams
反方段转而支撑作业必要。
a large amount of mathematics homework
与前文避免压力之间需要限定。
改进建议
- 说明适量与过量作业的区别,并充分解释休息或自主活动价值。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
两方分段清楚,论点和例子可跟随;每段后都重复自身赞同,成绩升学工作链条多次出现。
档位依据:7档清楚组织成立;8档需减少立场重复。
查看评分证据
I think home assignments are beneficial
反方段末重申立场。
I believe that home study tasks improve a child’s chances
正方段末再次重复。
改进建议
- 主体集中发展各方理由,结论统一给出有条件的支持。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
extracurricular、tertiary education和attain higher grades准确;home study tasks反复替换homework显得刻意,career chances较泛。
档位依据:有一定灵活精确性,符合7档;8档需自然而具体。
查看评分证据
attain higher grades
成绩搭配准确。
home study tasks
反复使用较生硬的替换词。
改进建议
- 自然使用homework,并以practice或revision按具体功能区分。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
条件、关系、分词和被动结构准确,多数句子无误;部分并列句较拥挤,介词a chance of entering略不如to自然。
档位依据:8档准确复杂结构成立;9档需更精练的句子调配。
查看评分证据
pupils aged between 10 and 16 who are given
分词和关系被动准确。
which allows them to secure a place at university
关系从句清楚。
改进建议
- 用简洁句式区分成绩提高与升学机会,避免长结果链。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源题目;实际考试出处未核实
Some people believe that schoolchildren should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think it is not a good idea for teachers to assign home study tasks to school children, while others say it is an essential part of learning. I believe youngsters need homework to achieve better exam results as it gives them a chance of entering higher education.
On the one hand, some believe that homework is of no benefit and becomes a burden to school children. This is because pupils spend their whole day studying, taking part in after-school clubs, and feel exhausted after returning home. For instance, in Japan, the majority of youngsters are under pressure to complete vast amounts of homework along with extracurricular activities. If they fail to finish their assignments they may not do well in exams, meaning they would be unable to get into a good high school. I think home assignments are beneficial but children should not be put under this kind of pressure.
Other people would say that homework plays a vital role in the development of knowledge for students and I agree with this. One reason for this is that home study tasks help pupils understand school subjects better and allow them to attain higher grades. For example, according to extensive research, pupils aged between 10 and 16 who are given a large amount of mathematics homework do far better in tests than those who are not given any home assignments. I believe that home study tasks improve a child’s chances of entering tertiary education and eventually obtaining a well-paid job.
To conclude, although views differ concerning children being assigned homework, I would argue that home assignments are necessary to help pupils get good grades, which allows them to secure a place at university and improves their career chances.
- 文章身份
- 名师教学示范
- 题目来源
- 教学题目