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塑料瓶回收流程The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明环境与动物197 词AI 估评 7 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 6.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

阶段数、主流程及成品回流完整,处理顺序准确;原料被精炼和轧制是未标明的额外步骤,结束条件torn out也非图示说明。

档位依据:清楚概述与主要步骤支持7档;加入加工细节使其未达8档忠实准确。

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  • the raw materials are refined and rolled

    图仅标Raw material,未说明这两项额外工艺。

  • before being fed into a machine to make plastic pellets

    清洗后制粒顺序正确。

  • 题图证据

    已看九编号循环图,分类有合格与剔除出口;粉碎后清洗、制粒再加热成原料,图仅展示原料堆而未标精炼;成品箭头返回回收箱。

改进建议

  • 按图写原料用于制造成品,删除未标注的精炼过程。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

按箭头顺序推进清楚,但Next重复、单一长细节段及末句再解释循环略冗余。

档位依据:清楚推进达到7档;连接词和段落管理尚未达8档。

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  • Next, those bottles are collected and transported

    阶段承接明确。

  • To reiterate the recycling process

    机械引导重复循环,语义也不自然。

改进建议

  • 按收集分类与加工生产分段,最后用回收箭头自然收束。

词汇资源 LR6 / 9

能使用compressed、pellets等必要术语;reiterate、torn out、plastic-made等多处词义或搭配不自然。

档位依据:词汇足以传意符合6档;不当搭配密度限制7档。

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  • once they are torn out or used

    torn out不是磨损,应为worn out,且瓶不适合此表达。

  • To reiterate the recycling process

    reiterate表示重申言语,不是重复运行工序。

改进建议

  • 用repeat the cycle及used products,避免不自然的plastic-made表达。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

被动、关系从句和before省略结构较准确;复数原料后用which is,标点也有少量累赘。

档位依据:正确复杂句频繁支持7档;一致性和标点不足限制8档。

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  • the raw materials are refined and rolled, which is used to manufacture end products

    which is与复数材料指代不一致。

  • which are, afterwards, sent through crushing machines

    插入副词两侧逗号不必要。

改进建议

  • 使which are与复数材料一致,简化插入副词标点。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 325 – The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
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The diagram illustrates the plastic bottle recycling procedure and the different steps involved in this recycling process. Overall, the process of recycling plastic bottles has nine steps, starting from placing the bottles in designated bins to producing end-consumer products like bags, t-shirts, pencils and so on. As the illustration depicts, the first step of recycling plastic bottles begins with people placing used plastic bottles in specified recycling bins. Next, those bottles are collected and transported to recycling centres where workers sort out recyclable plastic bottles. Selected bottles are then compressed and converted into large blocks, which are, afterwards, sent through crushing machines. The crushing process produces small plastic pieces, which are then washed before being fed into a machine to make plastic pellets. In the next step, heat is applied to the pellets, which ultimately form the raw materials for producing various plastic-made consumer goods. Next, the raw materials are refined and rolled, which is used to manufacture end products like t-shirts, pens, plastic bottles, containers, and so on. To reiterate the recycling process, the end products are placed in the designated bins once they are torn out or used. It keeps the plastic recycling process going.
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