儿童活动调查结果Results of a survey of children’s activities
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任务完成度 TA6 / 9
主要偏好和音乐相同得到概括，多数数值近似合理；将体操等当作户外活动无图上支持，评价阅读习惯很差超出数据，并漏给女孩电脑游戏16%的直接对比。
档位依据：相关概述及主要数据满足6档；无依据分类和评价使内容精确性不足以达到7档。
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The reading habit among boys is very poor, as only 2% of them read as a leisure activity.
2%正确，但very poor是评价，调查不支持习惯质量判断。
gymnastics and netball are common among girls, as 11% and 15% respectively participate in these two outdoor activities
数值正确，户外属性并未给出。
- 题图证据
已查看双饼图。男孩电脑34、篮球26、足球17、滑板11、音乐10、阅读2%；女孩舞蹈27、阅读21、电脑16、篮网球15、体操11、音乐10%。
改进建议
- 直接比较电脑游戏34%对16%、阅读2%对21%，删除户外归类及价值评价。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
按男孩和女孩分段易懂，转段明确，末句共同活动作比较；男孩偏好在同段再次概括，略重复。
档位依据：整体逻辑和衔接符合7档；重复与比较分散限制8档。
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Moving to the girls’ leisure activities
段间转换明确。
It is prevalent from the illustration that boys mostly play games and take part in outdoor sports.
重复此前概述，打断数字推进。
改进建议
- 去掉男孩段重复总结，把共同活动放在一起直接比较。
词汇资源 LR6 / 9
可表达比例和活动种类，但enumerate a survey result、prevalent from、pick this up等词义搭配不自然，精度不稳定。
档位依据：词汇足以传意符合6档；数处错误选择超过7档较少不恰当用词的水平。
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The pie charts enumerate a survey result
enumerate不适合概括图表展示。
It is prevalent from the illustration
prevalent误用，应为evident或clear。
改进建议
- 改用show the survey results及It is clear；用participate in dancing替代pick this up。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
能准确使用比较、关系从句和分数主语，复杂句频繁；结构变化仍以相近的主句加从句为主。
档位依据：复杂句控制及频繁正确句支持7档，灵活范围尚未充分体现8档。
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playing computer games is not as popular among girls as it is among boys
比较结构准确。
listening to music is an activity which is enjoyed by an equal percentage (10%) of boys and girls
动名词主语和被动关系从句正确。
改进建议
- 用合并对比句减少重复的活动说明，并校对分数主语的一致性。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
来源页题目，与同页选定答案配套；未核为实际考试真题
The pie graphs below show the results of a survey of children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which girls participate.
Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts enumerate a survey result which compares the type of cultural and free-time activities boys and girls like to participate in. At first glance, boys generally prefer computer games and outdoor sports, while girls mostly participate in activities like dancing, gymnastics and reading.
As is presented in the diagrams, more than one-third of boys play computer games, while one-quarter play basketball in their free time, according to the survey results. Moreover, nearly one in five boys plays soccer and one-tenth of them like to do skateboarding. It is prevalent from the illustration that boys mostly play games and take part in outdoor sports. The reading habit among boys is very poor, as only 2% of them read as a leisure activity.
Moving to the girls’ leisure activities, playing computer games is not as popular among girls as it is among boys. The most popular pursuits among girls are dancing (27% pick this up) and reading (more than one-fifth of girls are active readers). Among outdoor sports and activities, gymnastics and netball are common among girls, as 11% and 15% respectively participate in these two outdoor activities. Interestingly, listening to music is an activity which is enjoyed by an equal percentage (10%) of boys and girls.
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