欢迎朋友来访城市Welcoming a friend visiting the city
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
感受有重逢背景,景点建议照顾朋友兴趣和天气,携带物品有气候理由;接机提议自然,亲切语气一致。
档位依据:全部要求充分且针对收信人,符合9档。
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It's been almost three years since we last saw each other
感受有具体背景。
pack a good raincoat and comfortable waterproof shoes
携带建议具体。
改进建议
- 保持结合朋友兴趣及当地天气的建议。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
从重逢期待到活动再到准备事项自然推进,天气条件与衣物建议呼应,指代简洁,结尾接机顺畅。
档位依据:段落和衔接管理熟练,符合9档。
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You love food markets, so
以朋友兴趣自然解释推荐。
As for what to bring
明确转入准备事项。
改进建议
- 保留当前活动与准备事项分段的方式。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
seawall、harbour、gondola、waterproof及pick you up贴合旅行场景,习惯表达与亲切语气自然,词义精确。
档位依据:任务范围内灵活自然、准确丰富,符合9档。
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walk along the seawall and rent bikes
活动描写清楚。
take the gondola up the mountain
交通与景点表达精确。
改进建议
- 保持具体活动词与自然口语书信表达。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
时间、原因、条件和让步从句灵活准确,祈使建议与未来安排自然,标点控制稳定。
档位依据:范围与准确控制满足9档。
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If the weather is clear, we could take the gondola
条件建议结构准确。
even when the morning looks sunny
让步意义表达自然。
改进建议
- 维持多种从句与简洁建议句的平衡。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
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Task: A friend is going to visit your city for the first time next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
say how you feel about the visit
suggest some places to visit
give advice about what to bring
Dear Sam,
I was so happy to get your message! I can't believe you're finally coming to visit next month. It's been almost three years since we last saw each other, so I'm really looking forward to it.
There's so much I want to show you. On the first day, we could walk along the seawall and rent bikes in the big park near the harbour. You love food markets, so I'd also like to take you to the public market on the island, where you can try fresh seafood and local berries. If the weather is clear, we could take the gondola up the mountain for an amazing view of the city.
As for what to bring, pack a good raincoat and comfortable waterproof shoes. It rains a lot here at this time of year, even when the morning looks sunny. Also bring a warm sweater, because the evenings can get quite cool.
Let me know your flight details and I'll pick you up at the airport.
Best wishes,
Ana
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