范文阅读导入练习 →

向私家车征税改善公共交通Taxing Cars to Improve Public Transport

Task 2 · 来源范文利弊分析城市与交通277 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务回应 TR7 / 9

利弊均回应,旧车与低收入负担具体;固定税额只是设想,税收必然足以改善公交的判断较宽。

档位依据:主要观点有支持达到7分;假设限定和机制精度不足8分。

查看评分证据
  • old buses and trains that people would rather not use

    具体说明改善需求。

  • this type of tax would likely be set at a fixed amount.

    依赖题目未规定的税制假设。

改进建议

  • 明确固定税额只是一种实施方式,并说明累进税能否缓解弊端。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

利弊分段清楚,因果可以跟随;This would mean反复使用,结论仅重复有利有弊。

档位依据:总体连贯达到7分;衔接变化不足8分。

查看评分证据
  • This would mean that they would begin

    显式因果引导。

  • This would mean that it would hit those

    后文重复同一句型。

改进建议

  • 直接说明行为变化和收入影响,减少重复空泛引导。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

heavy burden、generate和fixed amount适切;make changes、traffic problems等略泛,tax与people反复。

档位依据:足够灵活达到7分;精确变化不足8分。

查看评分证据
  • hit those with less money harder

    自然表达相对负担。

  • make the necessary changes.

    可具体指出车次、车况或线路。

改进建议

  • 用fleet upgrades或more frequent services明确税收用途。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

条件、关系和被动多样,多数句子准确;would与代词链重复较多。

档位依据:范围准确度达到8分;充分灵活控制未达9分。

查看评分证据
  • public transport if it was improved.

    条件结构清楚。

  • people who may have no choice but to drive

    关系从句和固定不定式结构准确。

改进建议

  • 缩短would密集的长句,让每句主语和结果更直接。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源题目;实际考试出处未核实

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure. One of the first benefits of such a measure is that the heavy taxes would discourage car owners from using their cars because it would become very expensive to drive. This would mean that they would begin to make use of public transport instead, thus reducing traffic problems and pollution as well. Another benefit would be that much more use would be made of public transport if it was improved. It is often the case that public transport in cities is very poor. For example, we often see old buses and trains that people would rather not use. High taxes would generate enough money to make the necessary changes. Nevertheless, there are drawbacks to such a solution. First and foremost, this would be a heavy burden on the car drivers. At present, taxes are already high for a lot of people, and so further taxes would only mean less money at the end of the month for most people who may have no choice but to drive every day. In addition, this type of tax would likely be set at a fixed amount. This would mean that it would hit those with less money harder, whilst the rich could likely afford it. It is therefore not a fair tax. To conclude, this solution is worth considering to improve the current situation, but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing such a policy.
文章身份
机构教研范文
题目来源
教学题目
句子漫游 · 我的账户

欢迎回来

注册后可主动领取 3–7 天新手券。

选择适合你的练习节奏

练习时长

AI 学习需有可用练习时长。