申请延长签证Letter to the consular for an extension on your visa
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任务完成度 TA6 / 9
身份、签证到期背景、课程及延期时长都提及，目的基本清楚；So, no problem there与Now that you know等语气过随便，正式请求出现较晚。
档位依据：覆盖要求符合6档；7档要求清楚目的及稳定适当语气，本文尚未稳定做到。
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So, no problem there, and I would like to thank you again for that.
正式领事信中语气随意，感谢对象不明确。
grant me a visa extension for that period
最后才提出明确请求。
改进建议
- 首段直接提出延期请求，并统一正式而简洁的语气。
连贯与衔接 CC6 / 9
学习背景、进一步计划及请求有总体顺序，但But, then、By the way和Now that you know等连接显机械且绕远。
档位依据：整体可跟随，符合6档；7档需更清楚紧凑的段间关系。
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But, then, I am also thinking of continuing my education
转折铺垫冗长。
By the way, I want to use these additional three months
核心课程原因被处理为插话。
改进建议
- 把课程及延期需求直接连在一起，删去插话式连接。
词汇资源 LR6 / 9
词汇能表达留学和延期，professional diploma适切；great country、fine Engineer及highly appreciate等措辞泛化或搭配欠自然。
档位依据：资源基本足够但精确性不足，符合6档；7档需更准确的正式用词。
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pursue a professional diploma course
课程表达清楚。
prepare myself as a fine Engineer
职业目标措辞生硬且Engineer不需大写。
改进建议
- 用develop my engineering skills明确职业收益。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
完成时、条件句和多层从句显示一定范围，整体意思清楚；礼貌条件结构的时态搭配和长句控制尚可改善。
档位依据：复杂结构总体受控，符合7档；8档需更稳定准确的条件表达及断句。
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If everything goes fine with my studies and according to the schedule
条件句可读但并列成分略不齐。
I would highly appreciate it if you grant me
礼貌条件句宜统一为could grant或granted。
改进建议
- 采用I would appreciate it if you could grant的稳定结构，并缩短第二段长句。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
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You have been staying in a foreign country for the last two years, and your visa is about to expire next June. However, you are planning to take a three-months professional course. You will need a visa extension.
Write a letter to the consular in the embassy and ask for an extension on your visa.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am an international student in the United Kingdom, and I came on a student visa about two years ago from India. Since then I have been living in this great country and studying to finish my post-graduation degree. If everything goes fine with my studies and according to the schedule, I should be able to complete my degree in Civil Engineering this coming June, which is only a few months away from now. So, no problem there, and I would like to thank you again for that.
But, then, I am also thinking of continuing my education for another three months after finishing my post-graduation degree except, of course, the problem is that my visa is going to expire as soon as I finish my degree. By the way, I want to use these additional three months to pursue a professional diploma course in “AutoCAD” since it very much aligns with my ambition to prepare myself as a fine Engineer.
Now that you know why I want to stay another three months in your country, I would highly appreciate it if you grant me a visa extension for that period.
Yours faithfully,
Chetan Singh
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