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悉尼火车客流与准点情况Passengers travelling by train in Sydney and trains running on time

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较城市与交通210 词AI 估评 6 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 6,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA6 / 9

两图均有描述及重要端点;人数细节大体准确,但概述把含急升回落的时期称渐增,准点率遗漏1998至1999及2001至2002两次恢复,整体波动未充分呈现。

档位依据:相关概述和数据满足6档;第二图主特征选择不充分使其未达7档。

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  • the number of rail passengers in Sydney gradually increased between 1995 and 2002

    概括略去2001高峰及随后回落。

  • more than 92% trains in 1995 arrived and reached their destination on time, but this record deteriorated

    只强调恶化,后面未交代两次恢复至约93%。

  • 题图证据

    已查看人数折线:1995约250百万,1999约266,2000为280,2001峰300,2002为280,2003至2004约279。

  • 题图证据

    已查看准点率折线:1995为92%、1997为86%、1999为93%、2000为85%、2002为93%、2003为91%、2004为72%。

改进建议

  • 概述旅客2001见顶与准点率反复波动后骤降,补两个恢复高点。

连贯与衔接 CC6 / 9

按图分段但人数段先说升至2001后跌2002,再回到2000重复说明;this number、it有时衔接松散。

档位依据:整体可跟随达到6档;局部时间倒回和重复阻止7档持续清楚推进。

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  • it abruptly increased in the next two years before dropping again in 2002. In 2000, 280 million passengers used locomotives

    先到2002又回到2000,重复时间推进。

  • From 2002 to 2004, the train commuters remained constant

    重述前面刚到达的2002阶段。

改进建议

  • 按1995至1999、2000至2001、2002至2004三阶段一次讲完。

词汇资源 LR6 / 9

有timeliness、deteriorated等词,但commuters缩小passengers含义,locomotives不应替代客运列车,maintain the schedule搭配略生硬。

档位依据:词汇足够传意符合6档;多个核心名词不准确限制7档。

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  • 280 million passengers used locomotives

    locomotive指机车,不是乘客通常乘坐的整列列车。

  • the number of train commuters

    题图旅客不限通勤者。

改进建议

  • 统一用passengers、trains和run on time,减少不准确同义替换。

语法范围与准确性 GRA6 / 9

能写关系与时间从句,但百分比后漏of反复出现,人数主语与it指代不一致,复杂句精度有限。

档位依据:简单复杂句混合满足6档;重复错误和指代语法不足使其未达7档。

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  • more than 92% trains

    应补of,后面15%和25%同样遗漏。

  • train commuters in Sydney were around 265 million, and it abruptly increased

    复数人群与it不一致,应以the number为主语。

改进建议

  • 补齐百分比后的of,并用the number of passengers控制单复数及指代。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源页题目,与同页选定答案配套;未核为实际考试真题

The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 314 – Passengers travelling by train in Sydney and trains running on time
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 314 – Passengers travelling by train in Sydney and trains running on time
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The line graphs give data on the number of train commuters in Sydney from 1995 to 2004 and outline the ratio of trains that ran on time during the same period. As an overall trend, the number of rail passengers in Sydney gradually increased between 1995 and 2002, and in 2004, a higher percentage of locomotives failed to run on time than in previous years. As the data suggests, 250 million passengers used trains in 1995 in Sydney, and this number slowly increased during the next 4 years. In 1999, train commuters in Sydney were around 265 million, and it abruptly increased in the next two years before dropping again in 2002. In 2000, 280 million passengers used locomotives, and this number further climbed and reached its highest, 300 million, in 2001. From 2002 to 2004, the train commuters remained constant at 280 million. Regarding the timeliness of trains in Sydney, it is clear that more than 92% trains in 1995 arrived and reached their destination on time, but this record deteriorated. It dropped to just over 85% in 1997. In 2000, almost 15% trains failed to maintain the schedule, and this scenario was the worst in 2004, when more than 25% trains in Sydney could not run on time.
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