医院道路在2007与2010年的变化Maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
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任务完成度 TA7 / 9
主要新增交通设施和停车分流覆盖正确,方位大体准确;原六站移除未明确,limited public transport和without formal structure评价超出地图,公众停车入口描述可更精确。
档位依据:主要特征和前后比较支持7档;少量图外评价及遗漏限制8档。
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Public transport access was limited
地图仅显示六个站点,不足判断服务可及性有限。
The previous parking area was transformed into a staff-only car park
停车用途变化准确。
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已查看两地图:2007医院路两侧六公交站、东侧共用停车场;2010西侧公交站场连两个新环岛,原停车场改员工专用,医院东侧增公众停车场,周围环路位置保留。
改进建议
- 明确原六公交站被新站场取代,公众停车直接入口在东侧环路,删去服务不足推断。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
现状到改建的段落清楚,2010内部按环岛、公交、停车排序,末句保留环路收束。
档位依据:逻辑与衔接符合8档;Perhaps the most notable转折稍多评价,尚非9档精练。
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In addition, a dedicated bus station was constructed
自然追加公交变化。
In both maps, ring roads surrounded the hospital and remained at the same location.
以共同保留项目结束对照。
改进建议
- 把2010长段按道路和停车分组,减少评价性引导。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
junction、dedicated、staff-only、reorganisation等用词准确灵活;formal structure和effectively偏抽象。
档位依据:广泛自然词汇支持8档;图示具体性稍受抽象评价影响,未达9档。
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at the junction connecting the hospital road to the city road
位置及连接表达具体。
linking the internal and external roads more effectively
effectively是推断,可改具体两条路名。
改进建议
- 以具体道路、入口名称替代有效性评价。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
完成时、被动、关系及分词结构控制良好,长句准确清楚。
档位依据:广泛结构和多数无误句达到8档;末段多同型被动句,灵活性尚非9档。
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which was a common parking area for both staff and visitors
关系从句准确补充用途。
which had separate lanes to connect with both roundabouts
关系从句和不定式结构准确。
改进建议
- 可用对照旧停车用途与新停车分流的主动结构丰富表达。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The two maps compare the changes made to the road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall, the area became significantly more organised and accessible by 2010, mainly due to the construction of new roundabouts, a dedicated public transport route, and expanded parking facilities.
In 2007, the hospital was accessible via a single main road connected to the city road in the south. A small car park was located to the east of the hospital road, which was a common parking area for both staff and visitors. Public transport access was limited, with bus stops positioned along the main road but without any formal structure to support traffic flow.
By 2010, the area had undergone some major improvements. A roundabout was built at the junction connecting the hospital road to the city road. Another roundabout appeared at the hospital entrance, linking the internal and external roads more effectively. In addition, a dedicated bus station was constructed on the south-west side of the hospital, which had separate lanes to connect with both roundabouts. Perhaps the most notable development was the reorganisation of parking. The previous parking area was transformed into a staff-only car park, and a separate visitor car park was constructed to the east, directly accessible via the new roundabout and ring roads. In both maps, ring roads surrounded the hospital and remained at the same location.
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