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广告是否不道德Is Advertising Unethical?

Task 2 · 来源教学范文同意或不同意媒体与广告296 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务回应 TR8 / 9

立场明确,侵扰、儿童消费压力及健康风险三方面均相关,短信例子具体。烟酒段主要凭潜在消费影响作道德判断,因果支撑稍概括。

档位依据:充分回应达到8分;少量支持未深入,限制9分。

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  • mobile companies are now able to send advertising messages via SMS to consumers' phones whenever they choose.

    具体说明广告进入私人空间的侵扰性。

  • alcohol adverts encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking

    提出相关健康风险,但形成影响的机制较简略。

改进建议

  • 解释针对年轻人的酒类广告如何把消费与受欢迎形象关联,以具体支持伦理判断。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

三个方面分别成段,增补顺序清楚,结尾合拢昂贵、不必要和不健康消费。结构提示略显常规且结尾有少量重复。

档位依据:良好组织与衔接达到8分;紧凑自然程度未达9分。

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  • A further aspect of advertising that I would consider unethical

    明确从侵扰转到诱导消费。

  • It is certainly true to say that advertising is an everyday feature of our lives.

    结尾先重复背景,稍延迟综合判断。

改进建议

  • 结尾直接综合三种伦理问题,减少广告普遍性的背景重复。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

intrusive、irritating、controversial及excessive consumption自然贴题,词汇范围广。最后用smoking指代烟草广告比较对象稍不精确。

档位依据:流畅广泛资源达到8分;偶发指称不精确限制9分。

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  • very intrusive and irritating at times.

    准确区分侵入性与令人厌烦的体验。

  • in the same way as smoking.

    比较本应是酒类广告和烟草广告,此处smoking过于简略。

改进建议

  • 将smoking改为tobacco advertising,让比较对象一致。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

让步、关系、原因和被动结构范围广,大多数句子准确。个别插入语与长句标点不够精细,比较末尾省略稍松。

档位依据:广泛结构、多数无误达到8分;未充分显示9分的全篇控制。

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  • Although we expect adverts in numerous situations, it now seems that there are very few places we can actually avoid them.

    让步、形式主语及关系从句准确组合。

  • Take for example advertising on the mobile phone.

    for example作为插入语可用逗号明确分隔。

改进建议

  • 用逗号清楚标记for example等插入语,并补全比较对象。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源教学题,实际考试出处未核实

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
The world that we live in today is dominated by advertising. Adverts are on television, on the World Wide Web, in the street and even on our mobile phones. However, many of the strategies used to sell a product or service can be considered immoral or unacceptable. To begin with, the fact that we cannot escape from advertising is a significant cause for complaint. Constant images and signs wherever we look can be very intrusive and irritating at times. Take for example advertising on the mobile phone. With the latest technology mobile companies are now able to send advertising messages via SMS to consumers' phones whenever they choose. Although we expect adverts in numerous situations, it now seems that there are very few places we can actually avoid them. A further aspect of advertising that I would consider unethical is the way that it encourages people to buy products they may not need or cannot afford. Children and young people in particular are influenced by adverts showing the latest toys, clothing or music and this can put enormous pressure on the parents to buy these products. In addition, the advertising of tobacco products and alcohol has long been a controversial issue, but cigarette adverts have only recently been banned in many countries. It is quite possible that alcohol adverts encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking, yet restrictions have not been placed on this type of advertising in the same way as smoking. It is certainly true to say that advertising is an everyday feature of our lives. Therefore, people are constantly being encouraged to buy products or services that might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy. In conclusion, many aspects of advertising do appear to be morally wrong and are not acceptable in today's society.
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