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斯托克福德村在1930至2010年的变化Stokeford village from 1930 to 2010

Task 1 · Academic地图与空间布局/变化描述城市与交通167 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分待复核查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

概述住房扩张,准确写出农田和商店消失、大宅改养老院、花园缩小、学校扩大及邮局保留;未述河流和桥梁不影响主要变化。

档位依据:主要特征充分而相关达到8档;少量不变设施遗漏阻止9档。

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  • A great many new homes had been built along the main road, while several cul-de-sacs had been added

    与2010年主路及新增支路密集住宅吻合。

  • The post office and primary school remained, although the primary school had been enlarged.

    邮局保留、学校扩建与图一致。

  • 题图证据

    1930图有大片farmland、shops、带gardens的large house;2010图住宅与支路增多,retirement home取代大宅,学校扩大,邮局和桥仍在。

改进建议

  • 可用一句补充桥与河流未变,增强前后比较。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

总览后按1930和2010两时点分段,地点与设施变化对应清楚;信息阅读顺畅。

档位依据:段落和时间过渡有效达到8档;空间分组还可更细,不必升9档。

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  • In 1930, there was a single road leading through the little village

    清楚建立起始地图。

  • Eighty years later, much had changed in the village of Stokeford.

    自然切换至第二张地图。

改进建议

  • 可按村中心与东部农田位置再细化空间比较。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

retirement home、cul-de-sacs、accommodate等地图词自然准确;regular houses略不贴切,但属局部用词。

档位依据:词汇范围与语境适切性总体达到8档;一处不自然搭配和泛称阻止9档。

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  • several cul-de-sacs had been added

    准确概括新增尽头路。

  • its gardens had shrunk to accommodate new houses

    自然说明花园缩小与住宅新增。

  • just ten regular houses

    regular houses不如ordinary houses或small houses自然。

改进建议

  • 避免regular houses这类含义不清的住宅描述。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、过去完成时被动、让步及并列结构准确,标点稳定;开头句式较普通,未需给9。

档位依据:结构广且大多数句子无误,符合8档。

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  • which was comprised of just ten regular houses and a larger one set among some gardens

    关系从句结构可读,尽管措辞略生硬。

  • although the primary school had been enlarged

    让步从句与过去完成时被动准确。

改进建议

  • 保持时间对照的语法准确,精简开头重复的地图介绍。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源逐字题干:IELTS Jacky 同版地图练习题;题图与范文来自 TED IELTS。实际考试出处未独立核实。

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
IELTS Task 1 question diagram
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题目材料说明:题干已与配套教学练习题核对;是否为官方考试原卷尚未核实。

There are two maps depicting the small village of Stokeford. The first one is from 1930 and the second is from 2010. Many changes took place during the intervening years, most notably with the addition of new houses. In 1930, there was a single road leading through the little village, which was comprised of just ten regular houses and a larger one set among some gardens. There were two shops, a post office, and a primary school, as well as a large amount of farmland all around the village. Eighty years later, much had changed in the village of Stokeford. The large house had become a retirement home, and its gardens had shrunk to accommodate new houses. A great many new homes had been built along the main road, while several cul-de-sacs had been added with yet more houses constructed along them. The post office and primary school remained, although the primary school had been enlarged. Meanwhile, the shops had disappeared, as had all of the farmland.
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