旅游支出最高的十个国家Top ten countries spending on travel
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任务完成度 TA8 / 9
全部项目与排名覆盖，最大项、并列和英国约中国一半比较准确；概述以发展程度分类超出图示，区域归纳未必要。
档位依据：充分准确的数据转述支持8档；图外概括限制9档。
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The United States and Germany followed, each spending around US$85 billion
并列准确。
Western European and developed nations occupied much of the remainder of the top ten
经济发展分类不是图中指标，且不能说明主要数值差异。
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已看横条图：中国约110，美国德国85，英国55，新加坡25，韩国香港20，印度15，马来西亚12，台湾10。
改进建议
- 概述改为前三明显领先、余下均不超过55，保留图内数值对比。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
由高额至低额分段，排名推进、并列和对比关系自然，容易跟随。
档位依据：排序和衔接良好达到8档；后段逐国列举稍常规，尚非9档娴熟整合。
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Further down the ranking
自然转入低额组。
Malaysia and Taiwan rounded out the list
清楚收束排名。
改进建议
- 把韩国香港并列组与最低两项合并对比，减少名单式展开。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
biggest spender、well ahead、expenditure等范围充分；spending in travel介词不当，allocating有预算意图色彩。
档位依据：有一定灵活性达到7档；搭配和表达精度限制8档。
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spending around US$85 billion in travel
通常为on travel。
only about half of China’s expenditure
倍数词汇准确自然。
改进建议
- 统一spending on travel，用spent替代暗示预算分配的allocating。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
关系从句、比较及分词结构准确，多数句无误；which was, although substantial插入稍重。
档位依据：广泛准确结构符合8档；局部嵌入修饰不够简练限制9档。
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placing it well ahead of all other nations
分词结果准确。
which was, although substantial, only about half of China’s expenditure
结构正确，但插入让步使句子偏重。
改进建议
- 将英国和中国的对比直接表达，省去插入评价。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
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The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Consumer Spending on Travel (US$ Billion)
Source: UNWTO
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries with the highest travel-related consumer spending in 2014 in US$ billions.
Overall, China was by far the biggest spender on travel, while Western European and developed nations occupied much of the remainder of the top ten. The least spending among these ten countries could be seen in Taiwan and Malaysia.
In more detail, Chinese citizens’ spending on travel in 2014 reached nearly US$110 billion, placing it well ahead of all other nations. The United States and Germany followed, each spending around US$85 billion in travel. Meanwhile, the United Kingdom spent close to US$55 billion, which was, although substantial, only about half of China’s expenditure. Singapore also featured on the list, allocating roughly US$25 billion to travel in 2014.
Further down the ranking, South Korea and Hong Kong both reported travel spending of approximately US$20 billion each. India spent just over US$15 billion, while Malaysia and Taiwan rounded out the list, with spending in the range of US$10 to 12 billion.
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