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四个欧洲国家的消费品支出Amount spent on consumer goods in four European countries

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较科技与科学233 词AI 估评 7 分
AI 估评 7 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA6 / 9

英国最高与高支出商品总体方向正确;但称法国在多数类别第二不符,法国CD比胶卷约少8千而非2千,意大利香水和CD约150而非155,若干细节失真。

档位依据:覆盖四国六项并有概述达到6档;重要比较和多处数值不准限制7档。

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  • France followed in most categories.

    法国明确第二主要是胶卷和CD,玩具并列,其余并非第二。

  • 2 thousand less on CDs

    胶卷约164、CD约156,差值约8千。

  • 题图证据

    已看横向柱图,德国/意大利/法国/英国约:音响146/148/146/152,球拍148/150/142/152,香水146/150/144/158,CD144/150/156/162,玩具146/156/156/168,胶卷144/154/164/172;单位千英镑,部分数值为刻度估读。

改进建议

  • 逐项核对法国第二的类别,改正CD差值与意大利约150千的两项。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

先总体再英国、继而其余国家,结构明确;末段混合多国逐项罗列且再次重复德国最低,信息安排稍拥挤。

档位依据:清楚推进和段落达到7档;段内分组及冗余不足8档。

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  • In detail, Britain clearly led the rankings

    由概述转英国细节清楚。

  • Finally, Germans showed the lowest levels of spending overall.

    此前概述已提,后续结尾再次重复。

改进建议

  • 用一段比较英德两端,另一段比较法意的类别差异。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

expenditure、rankings、lower-spending categories等词汇有范围;Brits偏口语,least spending nation搭配生硬,Photographic无须大写。

档位依据:足够灵活但有词体和搭配问题,符合7档而未到8档。

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  • Brits spent roughly 170 thousand pounds sterling

    Brits在正式报告中偏口语。

  • making it the least spending nation

    更自然写the country with the lowest overall spending。

改进建议

  • 用British consumers,改写least spending nation并规范普通名词大小写。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、让步含义的even短语、分词结果和长并列结构均较准确,复杂句整体可读。

档位依据:范围广、多数句准确符合8档;复杂结构尚可更紧凑以达9档。

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  • which was the highest single figure on the chart

    关系从句与前项对应清楚。

  • British consumers still spent close to 155 thousand, exceeding the other three countries

    分词补充比较结构准确。

改进建议

  • 可合并重复国家主语的短句,减少一个长段中的并列列举。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源页题目,与同页选定答案配套;未核为实际考试真题

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words. Amount spent on consumer goods
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 339 – Amount spent on consumer goods in four European countries
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The bar chart compares the amount of money that people in Germany, Italy, France and Britain spent on six different consumer products. These items include personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys and photographic film. Overall, British people consistently spent the most across nearly all categories, while Germans tended to record the lowest spending on those items. Moreover, most money went on purchasing Photographic film, toys, and CDs. In detail, Britain clearly led the rankings for money spent on six personal goods. Brits spent roughly 170 thousand pounds sterling on photographic film, which was the highest single figure on the chart. They spent slightly less on toys and CDs. Even in the lower-spending categories, such as personal stereos and tennis racquets, British consumers still spent close to 155 thousand, exceeding the other three countries. France followed in most categories. The French spent just over 160 thousand on photographic film, 2 thousand less on CDs, and 145 thousand on perfumes. They spent the least on tennis racquets. Moreover, Italians generally spent more money on toys (approximately 158 thousand), and their purchases of photographic film, perfumes and CDs were around 155 thousand. Finally, Germans showed the lowest levels of spending overall. They spent roughly 145 thousand on photographic film and CDs. For the remaining goods, this country’s expenditure mostly stayed between 145 and 150 thousand, making it the least spending nation in nearly every category.
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