为生日聚会向朋友咨询餐厅Asking About a Restaurant for a Birthday Party
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四个维度等权计分，均值 7.75，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
聚会计划、餐厅信息和菜品推荐均说明充分，询问具有实用性，朋友语气稳定；推荐菜的问题重复了一次。
档位依据：充分满足8档；9档需要更精练，避免重复相同推荐请求。
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a small gathering with close friends
交代聚会规模和来宾。
Do they have any standout dishes
明确索取菜品推荐。
改进建议
- 将推荐菜和个人最爱合成一个问题。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
总体顺序可跟随，餐厅交通和联系方式集中；邀请朋友突然夹在菜品段开头，推荐问题反复，段落焦点略有跳动。
档位依据：清楚推进符合7档；8档要求更稳妥的段内组织。
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Please do come to the party.
邀请插入菜品询问段，转折突然。
If you have any personal favourites from the menu
与前一句推荐菜问题重复。
改进建议
- 将邀请放在聚会计划或信末，菜品段只保留相关问题。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
accessible by public transport、cuisine、standout dishes等用词精准，日常表达亲切灵活；would love与in knowing等表达稍重复。
档位依据：广泛而准确的餐饮和出行词汇达到8档；9档还可减少重复的愿望句。
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easily accessible by public transport
准确询问可达性。
personal favourites from the menu
朋友间推荐语气自然。
改进建议
- 用直接而友好的问句替代部分重复的意愿表达。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
间接疑问句、条件句和原因从句掌握良好，多数句子准确；句型变化主要集中于委婉询问。
档位依据：达到8档准确灵活使用结构；9档全面灵活性证据略有限。
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if car parking is available nearby as some of my friends would love to drive their cars
间接问句与原因从句结合准确。
so I can check them out in advance.
目的关系表达准确。
改进建议
- 保持间接问句语序，适当合并功能重复的问句。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
来源页题目，与同页选定答案配套；未核为实际考试真题
A friend recently told you that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell your friend about your planned party
ask for details of the restaurant
ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear …………………..,
Dear Ben,
I hope you’re doing great! The other day you were talking about an excellent restaurant you visited, and I was wondering if it might be a good place for my birthday party next week.
I’m planning a small gathering with close friends, and I want to celebrate in a place with great food and a nice atmosphere. Could you please let me know the name of the restaurant and how to get there? Since we’re in London, I’d love to know if it’s easily accessible by public transport. I'd also be interested in knowing if car parking is available nearby as some of my friends would love to drive their cars. Also please give me their Facebook or Google Business Page addresses so that I can contact them.
Please do come to the party. I’d also love to hear more about the type of cuisine they serve. Do they have any standout dishes you’d recommend? If you have any personal favourites from the menu, I’d love to know so I can check them out in advance.
Looking forward to your reply!
Warm wishes,
Nathan
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