海滨小镇游客变化Seaside town visitors
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任务完成度 TA7 / 9
三线方向、端点、倍数及中途峰值准确；两镇traded places不精确，Marwick起点第二而Eastport末期第三；2010 Brindle领先也未点明。
档位依据：清楚概述和充分数字达到7档；排名概括与中期特征不足限制8档。
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the two towns effectively traded places
两镇不是严格互换排名。
a peak of roughly 360,000 in 2010
峰值正确，可补当年超过另外两镇。
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已看折线三时间点：Marwick150/310/480千，Eastport420/250/110千，Brindle90/360/200千；图示与题干一致。
改进建议
- 改为Marwick取代Eastport为第一，补Brindle2010短暂领先。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
相反的两条线合并，先升后降单列，段落关系与时间推进清楚；Brindle不同模式在概述与段首略重复。
档位依据：良好分组和衔接达到8档；重复提示限制9档极简自然。
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Eastport mirrored this almost exactly
承接相反幅度对比自然。
Brindle followed a different pattern.
清楚转组但与概述重复。
改进建议
- 直接以Brindle的起点引出细节，省去重复模式提示。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
mirrored、slid、low base、three quarters等自然灵活，数量变化精确；traded places隐喻在排名上稍失准。
档位依据：宽泛准确词汇符合8档；个别隐喻精度限制9档。
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a drop of nearly three quarters
幅度表达准确。
effectively traded places
对实际排名变化概括不够精确。
改进建议
- 用became the most/least visited准确说明地位。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
比较、分词、after which及并列结构准确，复杂句流畅。
档位依据：广泛结构和多数无误句达到8档；部分同型起止句可更灵活以接近9档。
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starting as the busiest town with about 420,000 visitors
分词主语对应正确。
after which numbers slid to around 200,000
关系连接和时态正确。
改进建议
- 保留准确的分词和时间从句，减少重复起点终点句式。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
GoPrep Writing course 原创练习数据与题目；网站说明为教学材料，非官方IELTS试题。
The graph above shows the number of international visitors to three seaside towns, Marwick, Eastport and Brindle, over a twenty-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Town | 2000 | 2010 | 2020
Marwick | 150,000 | 310,000 | 480,000
Eastport | 420,000 | 250,000 | 110,000
Brindle | 90,000 | 360,000 | 200,000
The graph illustrates how many international visitors travelled to three seaside towns, Marwick, Eastport and Brindle, between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, visitor numbers to Marwick rose steadily throughout the period, whereas Eastport saw a fall of almost the same size, so the two towns effectively traded places. Brindle followed a different path, climbing to a peak halfway through before falling back.
Marwick attracted roughly 150,000 visitors in 2000 and grew without interruption to around 480,000 by 2020, more than tripling over the twenty years. Eastport mirrored this almost exactly: starting as the busiest town with about 420,000 visitors, it declined steadily to about 110,000, a drop of nearly three quarters.
Brindle followed a different pattern. From a low base of about 90,000 in 2000, there was a sharp rise to a peak of roughly 360,000 in 2010, after which numbers slid to around 200,000 by 2020. By the end of the period it sat between the other two towns.
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