餐厅午餐与晚餐销售额Restaurant lunch and dinner sales
AI 估评 7 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分，均值 7，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA7 / 9
所有数字准确，概述两项主要模式，午晚餐极值也清楚；正文几乎逐格复述且反复重述晚餐更高，选择和比较不够精炼。
档位依据：清晰概述、关键特征与数据支持达到7档；充分突出特征而非逐项列举仍不足8档。
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dinner sales are always greater than lunch sales and weekdays have higher sales than weekends
概述准确。
Turnover peaks on Wednesdays at $2,595
午餐最高点准确。
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已看销售表，周一至周日午餐2400/2450/2595/2375/2500/1950/1550美元；晚餐3623/3850/3445/3800/4350/2900/2450美元。
改进建议
- 突出两个峰值日期不同，并用范围概括相近的工作日午餐数值。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
午餐和晚餐分段有效、周内顺序清楚；概述及两段首句重复同一比较，then/following this连接偏机械。
档位依据：清晰推进达到7档；重复和列表式衔接限制8档。
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Lunch sales are always lower than dinner.
与概述重复。
Evening revenue is higher than lunchtime revenue every day.
第三次表达同一比较。
改进建议
- 删除两段开头重复判断，直接从各自峰值或周内变化展开。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
revenue、turnover、peaks、dip等有变化，数量表达清楚；reduces用作销售额下降稍不自然，lower than dinner比较对象不够精确。
档位依据：词汇足够灵活达到7档；局部搭配和概念精确性限制8档。
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reduces to $2,375 on Thursdays
宜用falls或drops表达销售额下降。
the revenue declines significantly during the weekend
收入变化搭配自然。
改进建议
- 用falls to代替reduces to，并比较lunch sales与dinner sales。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
并列、关系从句和分词结构基本准确，长句可读；比较省略略不平行，多句反复用and then串联，灵活性有限。
档位依据：多种结构且常有无误句达到7档；局部结构精确性和变化不足8档。
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Lunch sales are always lower than dinner.
应比较两种销售额，补dinner sales更平行。
sales dip to $3,445 on Wednesday, before rising again to $3,800 on Thursday
分词与时间连接准确。
改进建议
- 把连续and then合并为更紧凑的rise...before falling结构。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
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书内教学题；未根据题面相似性升级为已核实实考题；题目出版来源与作者范文分开。
The table below shows the average sales per week at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Mon. Tues. Wed. Thurs. Fri. Sat. Sun.
Lunch $2,400 $2,450 $2,595 $2,375 $2,500 $1,950 $1,550
Dinner $3,623 $3,850 $3,445 $3,800 $4,350 $2,900 $2,450
The table displays the average weekly revenue of a small inner-city restaurant. Overall, dinner sales are always greater than lunch sales and weekdays have higher sales than weekends.
Lunch sales are always lower than dinner. Lunchtime sales on Mondays and Tuesdays are almost the same at $2,400 and $2450, respectively. Turnover peaks on Wednesdays at $2,595, reduces to $2,375 on Thursdays and then rises to $2,500 on Fridays. Weekend sales are the lowest, with $1,950 on Saturday and then a further decline to $1,550 on Sunday, which is the lowest figure for the entire week.
Evening revenue is higher than lunchtime revenue every day. Monday’s sales are $3,623 and then they rise to $3,850 on Tuesday. Following this, sales dip to $3,445 on Wednesday, before rising again to $3,800 on Thursday, and then peaking at $4,350 on Friday. As with lunch sales, the revenue declines significantly during the weekend to $2,900 on Saturday, and then falls further to the week's lowest evening figure of $2,450 on Sunday.
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