申请临时调换班次Temporary shift change
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
培训内容与用途、具体工时及工作覆盖充分明确,方案考虑经理批准和同事协商,语气得体且请求可执行。
档位依据:充分相关满足全部要求,符合9档。
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finish work at 3.30 p.m. instead of 5 p.m.
变更明确。
complete the routine stock checks before leaving
覆盖安排具体。
改进建议
- 保持时间变更、补时和交接之间的对应。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
目的、具体时间、工作交接和商议安排清楚递进,those six Tuesdays及the difference回指明确,读者容易把握。
档位依据:衔接与段落管理熟练,符合9档。
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For those six Tuesdays
准确回指课程周期。
If you agree, I could discuss the arrangement with Sam
批准与协商次序清楚。
改进建议
- 维持先说明安排、再提出商议的结构。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
make up the difference、routine stock checks、hand over和cover灵活精确,正式而不过分生硬。
档位依据:任务内词汇全面自然准确,符合9档。
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hand over any urgent requests to the afternoon team
交接表达自然精确。
until you are satisfied that the cover is suitable
人员覆盖措辞适切。
改进建议
- 保持具体业务词与自然请求用语的搭配。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
间接疑问、关系、目的、条件与时间从句准确灵活,情态用法匹配待批准安排。
档位依据:充分范围和控制符合9档。
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so that I can reach the training centre on time
目的从句自然。
who usually handles similar enquiries
非限定关系从句准确。
改进建议
- 保持情态与条件结构对待批准计划的准确表达。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
You need to change your working hours temporarily to attend a training programme. Write a letter to your manager. Explain the programme, describe the change in hours you need, and suggest how your work could be covered.
Dear Ms Patel,
I am writing to ask whether I could adjust my working hours temporarily while I attend a training programme. I have been offered a place on a six-week evening course in spreadsheet analysis, which would help me prepare the monthly stock reports more efficiently.
The classes will run on Tuesdays from 4.30 to 6.30 p.m., beginning on 12 October. For those six Tuesdays, I would need to finish work at 3.30 p.m. instead of 5 p.m. so that I can reach the training centre on time. I could start at 7.30 a.m. on the same days to make up the difference.
I would complete the routine stock checks before leaving and hand over any urgent requests to the afternoon team. If you agree, I could discuss the arrangement with Sam, who usually handles similar enquiries. I would not confirm anything with the course provider until you are satisfied that the cover is suitable.
Please let me know if we could discuss this at our next meeting, or if a different arrangement would work better. Thank you for considering my request.
Yours sincerely,
Alex Morgan
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