乙醇生物燃料生产流程How a biofuel called ethanol is produced
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任务完成度 TA7 / 9
完整生产主线和燃料使用回流清楚;漏预处理阶段排放,末句直接认定可持续闭环,超过图中能证明的环境结论。
档位依据:清楚概述与主体阶段支持7档;排放来源遗漏及评价性结论限制8档。
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The carbon dioxide released during combustion is recaptured by plants
燃烧回流正确,但没有覆盖预处理回流。
showing a sustainable, closed-loop system
循环图不足以证明整体可持续。
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已看完整流程:植物、收割、预处理、纤维素、加工、糖、微生物、乙醇依箭头连接;汽车卡车飞机燃料使用和预处理均有CO2回流箭头。
改进建议
- 补预处理排放回到植物,删除未经图示证明的可持续性判断。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
按物料流转连续说明,This biomass、The cellulose及This CO₂的指代稳定,概述和细节分工明确。
档位依据:顺序与衔接良好达到8档;最后再次概括循环略重复,未达9档极自然的精简。
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The cellulose is then chemically treated to form simple sugars.
以上一产物承接下一阶段。
This CO₂ is then taken up again by new plant growth
指代明确并闭合循环。
改进建议
- 将末尾回流句与前面排放句合并,避免重复循环总结。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
biomass、harnessing、fermentation、yields等自然专业词汇丰富;sustainable语义结论过强。
档位依据:宽泛灵活词汇支持8档;少数过强概括限制9档精度。
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triggering a fermentation process that yields ethanol
表达动作与产物自然。
a sustainable, closed-loop system
sustainable不是图示直接信息。
改进建议
- 保留生产和循环词汇,以carbon dioxide returns to plants替代价值评价。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
被动、过去分词省略、关系从句及结果分词准确,复杂过程句清楚。
档位依据:结构范围与多数无误句达到8档;多阶段连续短主句可进一步灵活组合以达9档。
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Once harvested, this biomass undergoes pre-processing
省略从句与主语一致。
When burned, it emits carbon dioxide, which is released into the atmosphere.
时间省略与被动关系从句正确。
改进建议
- 保持准确性,可合并相近加工步骤使长短句变化更自然。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced .
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Biofuel production: how ethanol is made

The diagram illustrates how ethanol, a biofuel, is produced in a continuous cycle that connects plant growth, industrial processing, fuel use, and carbon dioxide emissions.
Overall, the cycle begins with plants absorbing sunlight and carbon dioxide, then moves through several stages of processing and fermentation to create ethanol, which is used in vehicles. The carbon dioxide released during combustion is recaptured by plants, completing the circle.
In detail, plants and trees grow by harnessing energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide (CO₂). Once harvested, this biomass undergoes pre-processing to break it down into cellulose. The cellulose is then chemically treated to form simple sugars. After that, microbes are added to these sugars, triggering a fermentation process that yields ethanol. Finally, the ethanol is used as a fuel in cars, trucks, and aeroplanes. When burned, it emits carbon dioxide, which is released into the atmosphere. This CO₂ is then taken up again by new plant growth, which feeds into the start of the cycle, showing a sustainable, closed-loop system.
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