机场现状与来年规划Site of an airport now and how it will look next year
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA7 / 9
主要扩建、门数、列车与新设施覆盖清楚;缺Y形变化和离境咖啡搬迁,对保留的安检海关没有明确比较,单个新增设施写成复数略粗。
档位依据:清楚概述与主要变化达到7档;空间及保留项目展开不足限制8档。
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the airport will have eighteen gates and a sky train inside the airport
门数及交通替代正确。
It will also have ATMs and cafes for passengers in the arrival area.
图上各一处,概括较粗。
- 题图证据
已看两平面图:左离境右到达,安检及海关区保留;旧值机左、咖啡右,未来值机右、行李托运左、离境咖啡移左下;北部8门改18门Y形,内部列车;到达右增咖啡、ATM、租车。
改进建议
- 补Y形航站臂、咖啡迁移及安检海关保持原位。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
现状与规划分段清楚;机场和arrival area重复较多,It、Opposite to it的指代须回看前句。
档位依据:总体推进清楚支持7档;重复及局部指代限制8档。
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It will be built where the check-in point is now. Opposite to it
It回指bag drop facilities,数和对象略含混。
The arrival area, on the other hand
现状两区对照清楚。
改进建议
- 直接用bag-drop area和check-in counter作主语,减少it反复。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
amenities、accessibility、customs等词适合机场;this place、looks empty和entry points较泛,重复airport较多。
档位依据:足够词汇与一定灵活性符合7档;搭配与空间术语精度限制8档。
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what this place will look like a year later
this place较泛。
does not have such amenities and looks empty
较口语,可准确说没有所列服务设施。
改进建议
- 用terminal、arrivals hall等明确空间名词,避免looks empty。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
关系从句、将来被动和比较句大多准确;复数facilities后用It,现状描述用could时态不稳。
档位依据:频繁正确复杂句达到7档;代词数和时态细节限制8档。
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bag drop facilities. It will be built
复数先行词后用单数代词。
customs and passport control could be seen
描述现状用can be seen或are located更一致。
改进建议
- 统一设施单复数,现状用现在时,规划用将来时。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams compare what the Southwest Airport looks like now, and what this place will look like a year later, when the renovation work will finish.
Overall, the Southwest Airport will be expanded, and it will offer far more facilities and better accessibility for passengers after the development work is done.
As the map suggests, the airport now has a single arrival and departure area. The departure area is on the left of the main building and has a check-in counter for passengers and a cafe. The arrival area, on the other hand, does not have such amenities and looks empty. Straight ahead of the arrival area, customs and passport control could be seen. Similarly, passport control and security are located for departing passengers. The airport now has eight gates, two walkways, and check-in areas.
After the development work, which is expected to finish next year, the airport will have eighteen gates and a sky train inside the airport. New shops will be built, and the departing passengers will have access to bag drop facilities. It will be built where the check-in point is now. Opposite to it, there will be the check-in point. The renovated airport will have more departure and entry points to serve more passengers at a time. It will also have ATMs and cafes for passengers in the arrival area. Finally, a car hire facility will also be included on the right side of the arrival hall.
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