咨询租车事宜Car rental enquiry
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四个维度等权计分，均值 8，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
车辆要求和取车时间充分具体，费用询问存在，保险所需信息相关；价格方面只问总费用，展开相对较少。
档位依据：8档充分覆盖成立；9档可更具体询问租金所含项目。
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for a period of 9 days
期限明确。
let us know the costs as soon as possible
费用要求明确但较概括。
改进建议
- 进一步询问保险或机场取送是否计入报价。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
时间、车型和报价安排清楚，因果说明与同行人数衔接自然；保险信息置于请求之后略显补记。
档位依据：8档顺畅结构成立；9档可更整合保险与费用信息。
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As I will be travelling with my wife and two children
车型要求有因果依据。
For insurance purposes
补充信息有关，但单独置后稍突兀。
改进建议
- 将驾照和年龄信息并入费用或保险询问段。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
representatives、camping equipment、availability与clean driving licence准确；comfortably travel off road用词稍笼统。
档位依据：词汇灵活贴合任务，符合8档；9档需更精确表达越野性能。
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confirm availability of a suitable vehicle
自然正式询问。
a clean driving licence
驾驶记录习惯表达准确。
改进建议
- 用suitable for off-road driving直接表达路况要求。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
将来进行时、原因从句、关系从句和条件请求准确，复杂句多且不妨碍阅读；复合形容词连字符稍欠规范。
档位依据：符合8档广泛准确结构；9档仍需细节标点更稳定。
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As we are flying in, we would like to either pick the car up
原因和选择结构清楚。
a medium sized vehicle
名词前复合形容词宜用medium-sized。
改进建议
- 规范medium-sized等名词前复合修饰语的连字符。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
页面称实考练习题；未独立确认真题
You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter:
Explain what type of car you would like
Give details of when you would like the car
Request more information about the cost
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear…
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to arrange a rental car for my upcoming visit to Chelling City. I will be arriving on the 13th of January and will need the vehicle for a period of 9 days. As we are flying in, we would like to either pick the car up at the airport or meet one of your representatives there. My flight number is NZ154, arriving at 8.45 am.
As I will be travelling with my wife and two children, as well as luggage and camping equipment for the period, we are looking for a medium sized vehicle that will comfortably travel off road.
I would be grateful if you could confirm availability of a suitable vehicle and let us know the costs as soon as possible so we can get this arranged.
For insurance purposes, I have a clean driving licence and am 48 years old.
With thanks,
Brian Sharples
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