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水循环及回流路径Water cycle: describe the return routes

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明环境与动物176 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

全部主要转换、太阳能及两条回流准确,概述清楚;说明无人干预、无时间或比例数据是正确的缺项说明但对主要特征贡献有限。

档位依据:充分准确覆盖达到8档;若聚焦实质流转、减少元说明可更符合9档恰当性。

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  • either directly over the ocean or indirectly via surface runoff and rivers on land

    两条回流路线准确。

  • The diagram gives neither the proportions following each route nor the time required

    图确实无此信息,但不是需要扩展的核心。

  • 题图证据

    已看水循环图:海洋向上蒸发标Solar energy,水汽冷却到凝结、降水;一箭头直接回海,一箭头经Surface runoff和River flow回海;图注明只列部分路线。

改进建议

  • 删减未提供信息的说明,突出蒸发与凝结的形态变化。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

概述后先大气过程再回流分支,结构自然;最后再次说蒸发回流略重复。

档位依据:良好分组与衔接支持8档;重复循环说明限制9档精练。

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  • Taking the ocean as a starting point

    选取循环起点清楚。

  • In the land route shown, surface runoff enters rivers

    从直接落海切换陆地分支自然。

改进建议

  • 将末尾再蒸发句与分支回海句合并,减少重复。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

circulates、vapour、condenses、precipitation等术语准确,route与return表达灵活。

档位依据:词汇流畅且精确符合8档;若干泛化diagram shown等措辞仍可压缩,未充分达9档。

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  • The resulting water vapour cools and condenses

    科学过程词准确。

  • the proportions following each route

    抽象比例说明准确但可删减。

改进建议

  • 保留物态和方向词,减少描述图本身的泛化短语。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、分词、被动及either/or结构准确,多数句无误,时态一致。

档位依据:广泛准确结构达到8档;常规阶段主句占比高,完全灵活的9档证据尚不充分。

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  • which carry the water towards the ocean

    关系从句与复数谓语正确。

  • liquid water evaporates with energy supplied by the sun

    过去分词修饰准确。

改进建议

  • 可用一个while对照两条回流路线,增强结构与比较的结合。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The diagram shows selected routes in a simplified coastal water cycle. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Coastal water cycle
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The diagram illustrates selected routes by which water circulates between the ocean, the atmosphere and the land in a coastal setting. It shows evaporation, cloud formation and rainfall, together with two routes through which water returns to the ocean. Overall, ocean water enters the atmosphere as vapour and returns as rain, either directly over the ocean or indirectly via surface runoff and rivers on land. The two return routes join at the ocean, from which evaporation can occur again. Taking the ocean as a starting point, liquid water evaporates with energy supplied by the sun. The resulting water vapour cools and condenses, forming clouds. Precipitation then falls in the form of rain. No machinery or human intervention is indicated in these natural processes. Rain that falls over the ocean returns water directly to it. In the land route shown, surface runoff enters rivers, which carry the water towards the ocean. Water can subsequently evaporate again, continuing the cycle. The diagram gives neither the proportions following each route nor the time required for the water to return.
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