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三种金属价格的月度变化Average monthly change in the prices of three metals

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括工作与经济233 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

清楚辨别变化率,突出镍和铜的波动差异及共同低谷,大部分节点与平台准确;锌六月至十月写在零上下徘徊不够准确,该阶段均为负。

档位依据:关键特征选择和支持充分达到8档;该局部不准确阻止9档全篇充分准确。

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  • nickel’s average price surged by around 6% in January 2014, its highest monthly gain

    正确将6%作为当月增幅。

  • From then until October, its monthly change hovered just above or below zero

    锌这段时间均低于零,并未高于零。

  • 题图证据

    已查看折线:镍1月6、2月4、3至4月1、6月-3、7至9月-1、10月-2、11至12月1%;锌2月峰3、6及10月-1、7至9月-0.5、12月2%;铜1月2、5至6月-0.5、7至9月1、12月1.5%。

改进建议

  • 将锌六月至十月准确写为小幅负增长,并避免不必要的模糊近零表述。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

概述后单列最波动的镍,再比较锌与铜,时间顺序清楚,衔接稳定。

档位依据:易读排序及良好衔接符合8档;仍偏逐线追踪,综合关系可更娴熟以达9档。

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  • After a brief plateau

    承接镍3至4月的平台。

  • Meanwhile, copper showed the least volatility

    从锌转入铜并点明对比轴。

改进建议

  • 把六月共同低点及年底排序合并比较,减少逐月跟踪。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

trajectory、plateau、tumbled、rebounded、volatility等变化词自然,能准确区分price和price change。

档位依据:表达范围与控制支持8档;hovered just above or below zero的概括精度限制9档。

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  • its price change tumbled to an average of negative 3%

    变化率术语与下降动词组合清楚。

  • then rebounded to finish the year with a modest increase

    恢复与幅度词运用自然。

改进建议

  • 用remained negative准确描述锌后半年的负值区间。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

复杂时间序列、分词结果及并列结构准确,长句阅读顺畅,标点受控。

档位依据:宽泛结构且多数句无误达到8档;多句重复动词链框架,未充分体现9档完全灵活。

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  • before falling sharply to roughly 1% by March

    时间与分词结构准确。

  • its price change started at 2% in January 2014, gradually declined to just below zero around June, then rose back to around 1%

    多个并列谓语的时态一致。

改进建议

  • 适当用跨金属的while比较句替代重复时间动词链。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 333 – Average monthly change in the prices of three metals
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The line graph illustrates the average monthly price changes of three metals (namely, copper, nickel, and zinc) throughout 2014. Overall, the price changes of nickel showed dramatic fluctuations with an overall downward trajectory, whereas copper and zinc exhibited more moderate and stable price changes. All three metals’ price changes saw a clear dip around mid-year, followed by a partial recovery toward the end of 2014. In detail, nickel’s average price surged by around 6% in January 2014, its highest monthly gain, before falling sharply to roughly 1% by March. After a brief plateau, its price change tumbled to an average of negative 3% in June, the year’s lowest point, and then recovered to around -1% from July to September. In October, it dropped again to approximately -2%, but then rebounded to finish the year with a modest increase of 1% in both November and December. Zinc’s price change began at 1% in January, peaked at 3% in February, and then declined slowly, reaching -1% in June. From then until October, its monthly change hovered just above or below zero, before rising again to 2% by December. Meanwhile, copper showed the least volatility: its price change started at 2% in January 2014, gradually declined to just below zero around June, then rose back to around 1% for several months between July and September. By December, copper’s price change had settled at about 1.5%.
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