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全球农业土地退化Global agricultural land degradation

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较环境与动物192 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

概述准确,两图主要排名与各地首要原因均有数据支持,所有引用数字吻合;各地主因不同这一跨地区模式仍主要藏在细节中。

档位依据:充分准确覆盖达到8档;进一步集中归纳区域差异可更充分达到9档。

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  • overgrazing was the leading cause of global land degradation and Europe had the highest proportion of degraded land

    两图核心极值准确。

  • There was no damage due to over-cultivation in Oceania.

    准确选择显著零值。

  • 题图证据

    已看饼图:过度放牧35%、砍林30%、过度耕作28%、其他7%。表:北美砍林0.2、耕作3.3、放牧1.5、总5;欧洲9.8/7.7/5.5/23;大洋洲1.7/0/11.3/13(%)。

改进建议

  • 概述补充三地退化主因各异,形成对照框架。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

两图分段、区域按总退化比例排序合理;区域段逐项重复highest/main/least和数值,横向比较较少。

档位依据:清楚推进及段落满足7档;列表式重复限制8档更灵活衔接。

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  • Turning to the individual areas

    由全球到区域层次清楚。

  • The biggest cause was over-cultivation at 3.3% and the least was the removal of forests at 0.2%.

    重复上一地区的首尾原因句框。

改进建议

  • 用whereas对照欧洲砍林、大洋洲放牧和北美耕作三种主因。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

degradation、deforestation、less fertile等词汇合适;growing too many crops对过度耕作的释义不够精确,arable land又比agricultural land范围窄。

档位依据:有足够词汇范围达到7档;少量不精确改写限制8档。

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  • growing too many crops

    过度耕作宜直接用over-cultivation,避免简化为作物数量。

  • North America had the lowest proportion of arable land damaged

    arable land可能排除牧地,不如原图land准确。

改进建议

  • 保留必要术语over-cultivation,用land而非arable land。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、被动、respectively与并列结构使用准确,多数句无误;部分表达冗长但含义清楚。

档位依据:语法范围和准确性达到8档;更精练的句法控制可提升至9档。

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  • which accounted for 30% and 28%, respectively

    关系从句与两个数值对应准确。

  • Oceania had 13% of its land that was degraded

    语法可理解但可精简为13% of Oceania’s land was degraded。

改进建议

  • 把had...that was结构改成直接的百分比主语被动句。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

书内教学题;未根据题面相似性升级为已核实实考题;题目出版来源与作者范文分开。

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
原书题目与图表:Global agricultural land degradation
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The pie chart illustrates the main causes of the deterioration of global farmland and the table gives data regarding the influence of these causes on three areas during the 1990s. Overall, overgrazing was the leading cause of global land degradation and Europe had the highest proportion of degraded land. With regard to global land degradation, the leading cause was overgrazing at 35%. This was closely followed by cutting down forests and growing too many crops, which accounted for 30% and 28%, respectively. Other reasons were only responsible for 7% of the damage. Turning to the individual areas, Europe had the highest proportion of land that was less fertile at 23%. The main cause was deforestation at 9.8% and the least was overgrazing at 5.5%. Oceania had 13% of its land that was degraded and this was caused by overgrazing at 11.3% and deforestation at a much lower 1.7%. There was no damage due to over-cultivation in Oceania. North America had the lowest proportion of arable land damaged at 5%. The biggest cause was over-cultivation at 3.3% and the least was the removal of forests at 0.2%.
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