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青少年舞蹈课的地点与类型Location and types of dance classes young people are attending

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较城市与交通222 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

两个图的主导类别和年龄偏好清楚,全部场地及三舞种都有支持,主要比较准确;把课程占比偶尔写成场地数量占比,踢踏低龄450近似为440。

档位依据:充分且大体准确的覆盖支持8档;分母及局部近似问题限制9档。

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  • which is double the number of 11 to 16‑year-olds who take ballet

    芭蕾两倍关系准确。

  • account for around one-quarter of all venues

    饼图是课程按地点分布,不一定是不同场地数量的比例。

  • 题图证据

    已查看场地饼图:私人48%、学校24%、社区及其他18%、学院10%。

  • 题图证据

    已查看舞种柱图:11岁以下/11至16岁,芭蕾600/300,踢踏约450/420,现代300/520。

改进建议

  • 统一表述为课程的百分比,低龄踢踏人数写约450。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

按图分段,舞种对照清楚;in a town in Australia在引言、概述和细节重复,信息推进略拖沓。

档位依据:逻辑清楚符合7档;背景短语反复使用限制8档紧凑性。

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  • making it the predominant venue for young people in a town in Australia

    背景已在前两段重复出现。

  • Turning to the second chart

    转到第二图清楚。

改进建议

  • 地区和人群背景只保留一次,把篇幅用于比较。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

predominant、favoured、balanced distribution等词汇有效;location for dance classes by young people搭配较笨重,重复原背景较多。

档位依据:范围足够且有灵活性,符合7档;自然搭配尚未稳定达到8档。

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  • the most common location for dance classes by young people

    by young people修饰关系不自然,可用attended by。

  • tap dance shows a fairly balanced distribution

    表达两组接近自然。

改进建议

  • 用classes attended by young people,并精简重复地点短语。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

比较、关系从句、分词和被动结构准确,复杂句清楚,多数句无误。

档位依据:广泛结构准确使用符合8档;部分长修饰链仍可精炼以接近9档。

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  • nearly half of the total dance classes are held in private studios, making it the predominant venue

    被动及分词结果结构可读。

  • with approximately 600 attendees in that age bracket, which is double the number

    附加结构与关系从句准确呈现倍数。

改进建议

  • 缩短地区修饰链,使主句比较更突出。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The Charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Location of dance classes Types of dance classes (by age group)
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 329 – Location and types of dance classes young people are attending
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 329 – Location and types of dance classes young people are attending
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The pie chart shows the proportion of dance classes in different venues, while the bar chart illustrates the number of young people, by age group, participating in various dance styles in a town in Australia. Overall, private studios are by far the most common location for dance classes by young people in a town in Australia. Moreover, ballet is especially favoured by the youngest age group, and modern dance is most popular among older children. According to the first chart, nearly half of the total dance classes are held in private studios, making it the predominant venue for young people in a town in Australia. After-school classes in school halls account for around one-quarter of all venues, while community halls and other types of venues host about 18% of dance classes. College‑based studios are the least used, representing only 10% of all dance class locations. Turning to the second chart, ballet dominates among children under 11, with approximately 600 attendees in that age bracket, which is double the number of 11 to 16‑year-olds who take ballet. In contrast, modern dance attracts more of the older group – about 520 participants aged 11 to 16, compared to just 300 under‑11s. Finally, tap dance shows a fairly balanced distribution, with roughly 440 children under 11 and 420 in the 11-16 age group.
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