安排酒店周末住宿Arranging a hotel weekend
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任务完成度 TA8 / 9
日期时间、房型价格及附近活动均充分覆盖,儿童偏好明确;谈及其他酒店加价及不愉快意外的措辞略显生硬。
档位依据:8档充分回应成立;9档需请求语气更自然妥帖。
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two double rooms for four members of our family
房型人数明确。
so that there are no unpleasant surprises
价格要求清楚但措辞略带防备。
改进建议
- 直接询问周末总价及早入住晚退房费用。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
信息按时间、房型与活动顺序清楚,连接有效但Let me start、With regard及Furthermore显得过度标示。
档位依据:清楚推进符合7档;8档需更自然简洁的连接。
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Let me start by outlining our itinerary
铺垫较重。
With regard to our room requirements and the prices
重复预告接下来内容。
改进建议
- 各段直接写日期、房型和活动问题。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
itinerary、early check-in、rates和sightseeing准确,酒店语境词汇较丰富;unusual sightseeing机会的偏好略含混。
档位依据:较广准确资源达到8档;9档可提高活动偏好的精确度。
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an early check-in and a late checkout
住宿需求明确。
some unusual sightseeing opportunities
unusual未说明想要何种体验。
改进建议
- 具体提出儿童适宜或当地特色活动。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
条件请求、关系从句、目的句和时间表达准确,多数句子无误;分号后namely为非独立分句,标点有小问题。
档位依据:广泛结构与偶发标点问题符合8档;未达9档稳定控制。
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for two days; namely, the 15th and 16th of April.
此处分号宜改逗号或冒号。
local activities in which we could participate
介词关系从句准确。
改进建议
- 修正namely前的分号。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
既有2026原书教学情境,未把信件虚构日期当考试日期。
You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following:
- when you want to arrive and leave
- explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much they will cost
- ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to arrange our family’s upcoming visit to your hotel, as well as to ask for some additional information.
Let me start by outlining our itinerary, as we intend to stay at your hotel for two days; namely, the 15th and 16th of April. We will arrive at your hotel around 11 am on the 15th and plan to leave at around 4 pm on the 16th. Hence, we will need an early check-in and a late checkout.
With regard to our room requirements and the prices, we would like to reserve two double rooms for four members of our family. Furthermore, I would like to ask for confirmation of your hotel’s rates during the weekend so that there are no unpleasant surprises. You see, we have stayed at some hotels that double their rates on weekends.
Finally, I would be grateful if you could suggest some unusual sightseeing opportunities or local activities in which we could participate. We are particularly interested in entertainment for our children.
I look forward to receiving your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tim O’Neil
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