逾期归还租赁影碟Overdue DVD rental
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四个维度等权计分，均值 7.5，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
电影、归还时间和方式清楚，解释闭店归还及良好记录，要求检查具体；未明确要求核销罚款，解决诉求略可补足。
档位依据：全部要点充分覆盖达到8档；9档可更明确最终希望撤销何项记录。
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I rented a film entitled 'Master of the Seas'
电影定位清楚。
check your inventory once again
提出具体调查步骤。
改进建议
- 补充确认归还后取消逾期记录和罚款的请求。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
事件、通知与请求有清楚顺序；首段连续As起句及第三段Nonetheless的转折关系不够贴切。
档位依据：明确推进符合7档；8档需更自然精确的连接。
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As it was only a one night rental
因果连接有效。
Nonetheless, I have been a member of your store for over 6 years
会员记录是补充支持，并非明确让步。
改进建议
- 直接补充长期准时归还记录，避免生硬使用Nonetheless。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
rental、fines、verify和inventory适合租赁投诉，但time of the morning和obscure position略不自然，指称slot有变化过度。
档位依据：有灵活词汇但搭配不够稳定，符合7档；8档需提高自然度。
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your records will verify
书面表达适切。
landed in an obscure position
可更自然地说掉入不易看到的位置。
改进建议
- 使用out of sight等自然短语说明归还口内可能的位置。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
完成时、被动、关系和条件从句掌握较好，委婉请求准确，句法变化充分；少量逗号可省略。
档位依据：8档广泛结构与多数无误句成立；9档需更精细的标点和长句控制。
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claiming that the title has not been returned
分词和完成被动结构准确。
in case it has landed in an obscure position
预防性原因从句准确。
改进建议
- 减少并列宾语从句之间不必要的逗号。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
页面称实考练习题；未独立确认真题
You have received a letter from your local video shop claiming that a DVD you rented is now overdue. However, you have already returned the DVD.
Write to the video shop. In your letter
Tell them which film the letter is about
Explain when you returned it
Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear…
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
About one week ago, I rented a film entitled 'Master of the Seas', a recent release from your store. As it was only a one night rental, I returned the disc the following day. As your store was closed at the time of the morning that I took the film back, I posted it through the 'video return' slot you have on the front door.
This morning, however, I have received a letter from your office claiming that the title has not been returned, and that I now have fines to pay.
Nonetheless, I have been a member of your store for over 6 years, and I am sure your records will verify that I have always returned items on time. Could I ask that you check your inventory once again, and perhaps also check the postal slot where I returned the film, in case it has landed in an obscure position?
With thanks,
Len Binsley
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