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投诉受损台灯Damaged desk lamp complaint

Task 1 · General Training投诉/问题处理工作与经济182 词AI 估评 9 分
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

物品、破损和功能后果清楚,订单有助查询,换货和备用退款及回复期限明确,正式语气适当。

档位依据:全部要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。

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  • the white adjustable model, and my order reference is BC2048

    商品可定位。

  • the shade will not stay in position

    损坏的使用后果具体。

改进建议

  • 保持物品损坏、功能影响和补救要求的明确联系。

连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9

商品交付、检查损坏、证据和解决安排逐步推进,As a result及in case关系清楚,回指稳定。

档位依据:衔接自然且组织熟练,符合9档。

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  • As a result, the shade will not stay in position.

    因果清楚。

  • If the same model is unavailable

    备用方案自然承接换货要求。

改进建议

  • 维持事实、证据和补救方案的顺畅次序。

词汇资源 LR9 / 9

adjustable、joint、shade、outer packaging和at no additional cost精确自然,损坏描写区分各部件。

档位依据:任务范围内灵活精确用词符合9档。

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  • the joint connecting the arm to the shade was loose

    部件连接和故障描述精确。

  • torn along one side

    包装破损位置明确。

改进建议

  • 继续用具体部件和故障状态替代泛泛抱怨。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

关系、时间、条件、间接疑问和非谓语修饰准确,句式配合描述与请求功能,标点稳定。

档位依据:广泛结构和充分控制达到9档。

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  • When I opened the box, I found that

    时间和宾语从句准确。

  • whether you can offer a full refund instead

    间接问句自然。

改进建议

  • 保持条件请求与准确修饰语的使用。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。

You recently ordered an item online, but it arrived damaged. Write a letter to the company. Describe the item, explain the damage, and state what you would like the company to do.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about a damaged desk lamp that I ordered from your online shop last week. It is the white adjustable model, and my order reference is BC2048. The parcel arrived yesterday afternoon, two days after the expected delivery date. When I opened the box, I found that the base of the lamp was cracked and the joint connecting the arm to the shade was loose. As a result, the shade will not stay in position. The outer packaging was also torn along one side. I have kept the box and taken photographs of both the packaging and the damaged parts in case you need them. I would like you to arrange a replacement and collect the damaged lamp at no additional cost. If the same model is unavailable, please let me know whether you can offer a full refund instead. I need the lamp for my study desk, so I would appreciate a reply within the next few working days. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Alex Morgan
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