投诉邻居公寓噪音Noise from neighbouring flat
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
噪声种类、时段、频率和影响具体,解决建议切实且照顾双方,承认隔音问题使语气克制友善。
档位依据:各要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。
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music and furniture being moved after 11 p.m.
问题具体。
keep the music lower and avoid moving furniture after 10.30 p.m.
解决措施明确。
改进建议
- 保持具体说明影响与尊重邻居相结合的方式。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
从位置与噪声到睡眠影响,再到可协商办法自然推进,指代清楚,结尾双向沟通呼应共同解决。
档位依据:组织及衔接达到9档。
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I begin work at 7 a.m., so broken sleep
影响有清楚因果。
so that we can reach an agreement about reasonable quiet hours
沟通方式与目标相连。
改进建议
- 保留问题、影响、协商措施的清楚顺序。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
disturbance、broken sleep、rearrange和quiet hours准确自然,礼貌习惯表达灵活,语体符合邻里交流。
档位依据:任务内词汇精确自然且充分灵活,符合9档。
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sound travels easily between the flats
解释声传播自然。
sort this out easily
邻居之间友善而不生硬。
改进建议
- 保持温和用词及具体的声音描述。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
被动、完成时、条件、间接问句与目的从句准确,复杂结构自然服务于委婉请求。
档位依据:广泛结构和标点控制充分,符合9档。
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you may not realise how clearly it can be heard downstairs
情态、嵌入问句和被动准确。
If you are planning a gathering or need to rearrange the flat
条件内并列结构自然。
改进建议
- 维持条件和情态结构表达协商的准确性。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
A neighbour in your apartment building has recently been making noise late at night. Write a letter to the neighbour. Describe the noise, explain how it affects you, and suggest a way to solve the problem.
Dear Neighbour,
I live in flat 14, directly below you, and I am writing about some noise that has been reaching my bedroom late in the evening. Over the past two weeks, I have often heard music and furniture being moved after 11 p.m., particularly on weeknights.
The late-night disturbance makes it difficult for me to fall asleep, and on several occasions I have been woken after I had already gone to bed. I begin work at 7 a.m., so broken sleep has made the following mornings quite difficult. I understand that sound travels easily between the flats and that you may not realise how clearly it can be heard downstairs.
Would it be possible to keep the music lower and avoid moving furniture after 10.30 p.m. during the week? If you are planning a gathering or need to rearrange the flat, a short message beforehand would help me plan. I would be happy to exchange phone numbers so that we can reach an agreement about reasonable quiet hours and deal with any future problem directly.
I hope we can sort this out easily, and please let me know if noise from my flat ever causes you a problem as well. You can leave a note in my letter box or knock on my door after 6 p.m.
Kind regards,
Alex Morgan
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