废纸回收流程Recycling used paper
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任务完成度 TA9 / 9
七阶段、材料输入和去除物、浆到纸张再卷的变化全部准确；概述按前四和后三分组，有效完整地总结图意。
档位依据：任务要求完整、准确、恰当满足，达到9档。
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The first four stages turn old paper into a clean pulp, while the last three turn this pulp into finished paper.
准确概括两大加工阶段。
these sheets are dried and wound onto large rolls
形态与顺序准确。
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已看七阶段图：Collection按类型分类，Shredding小片，Pulping加水化学品，Cleaning去墨胶，Pressing成薄片，Drying卷大卷，Cutting包装新纸，无返回箭头。
改进建议
- 保持目前的阶段分组，内容无须补图外工艺。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
概述分组对应两个细节段，指代this pulp/these sheets明确，过程易跟随；阶段提示较显式。
档位依据：良好结构及衔接达到8档；To begin/At next/After/Finally稍机械，未达9档无痕衔接。
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This pulp is subsequently cleaned
以上一产物自然承接。
At the next stage, the clean pulp is pressed
按概述边界转入后半段清楚。
改进建议
- 可减少一个阶段引导，用产物名称串起操作。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
shredded、pulp、rolled out、wound onto等准确自然，重复与变化平衡良好。
档位依据：专业词汇精确而流畅达到8档；完全灵活范围的顶档证据尚不足。
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shredded into small pieces
动作与形态搭配准确。
pressed and rolled out into thin sheets
专业处理表达自然。
改进建议
- 保留这些准确搭配，无须为变化加入未经图示的术语。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
Once从句、关系从句、so that及并列被动准确，多数句无误。
档位依据：句式范围和准确性达到8档；多句同型被动仍可更灵活以接近9档。
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Once it has been sorted, the paper is shredded
完成被动和主句时态衔接正确。
so that any remaining ink and glue are removed
目的结果从句及复数谓语准确。
改进建议
- 可合并最后干燥与裁剪阶段，适当变化句长。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
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The diagram above shows how recycled paper is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Stage | What the diagram shows
1 | Used paper collected and sorted by type
2 | Paper shredded into small pieces
3 | Shredded paper mixed with water and chemicals to form pulp
4 | Pulp cleaned to remove ink and glue
5 | Clean pulp pressed and rolled into thin sheets
6 | Sheets dried and wound onto large rolls
7 | Rolls cut and packaged as new paper
The diagram illustrates the stages by which used paper is recycled to produce new paper.
Overall, the process is linear and consists of seven main stages, beginning with the collection of used paper and ending with the cutting and packaging of new paper. The first four stages turn old paper into a clean pulp, while the last three turn this pulp into finished paper.
To begin with, used paper is collected and sorted according to its type. Once it has been sorted, the paper is shredded into small pieces, which are then mixed with water and a number of chemicals to form a pulp. This pulp is subsequently cleaned so that any remaining ink and glue are removed.
At the next stage, the clean pulp is pressed and rolled out into thin sheets. After that, these sheets are dried and wound onto large rolls. Finally, the rolls are cut to size and packaged as new paper.
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