考试与持续评估的有效性Exams or Continuous Assessment?
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任务回应 TR7 / 9
立场直接,考试组织便利和单次测量问题有解释;持续评价只说时间长、方式多,没有项目或作业如何衡量能力的具体展示。
档位依据:相关观点扩展达到7分;替代方案支持不足8分。
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Factors like anxiety can reduce their performance
说明一次测验的局限。
over a longer period of time, in various ways
替代方案仍较泛。
改进建议
- 举一个项目如何观察实际运用能力的例子,并说明与考试的差别。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
组织便利、考试局限和替代建议顺序清楚;长主体末尾反复说代表性与可靠性,分段可改善。
档位依据:总体推进达到7分;重复和长段限制8分。
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However, traditional examinations are not the best means
清楚转折。
a far more reliable impression of what the student actually knows
重复前句代表真实能力的判断。
改进建议
- 将持续评价另段展开,删去重复可靠性的句子。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
representative、expertise和artificial construct适切;requires stress搭配不自然,and so on略泛。
档位依据:有一定灵活性达到7分;精确搭配不足8分。
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without the hassle of many months of continual observation
表达自然但hassle语体略随意。
requires enormous amounts of stress.
应表达causes或places stress,考试不“需要压力”。
改进建议
- 用causes considerable stress,并把and so on替换为具体因素或删除。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
关系、比较、被动及不定式结构广泛,多数准确;长句插入与并列标点稍松。
档位依据:范围准确度符合8分;细节控制未达9分。
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hundreds of students can sit together in a room
情态和动词形式准确。
which is itself an artificial construct, and requires
关系从句内and前逗号不必要,层次略松。
改进建议
- 将考试时限与压力分开表达,明确关系从句边界。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源题目;实际考试出处未核实
Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a lot of debate over how to conduct student assessments in various educational facilities. The traditional method is with examinations, but these days there is a lot of resistance to this, and many teachers prefer less stressful and more representative modes of assessment. This essay will argue in favour of continual assessment.
The advantages of exams are few and mainly focused on the institutions rather than the students. Exams can be organised quite easily and conducted in a short period of time, as hundreds of students can sit together in a room to do the test. These exams can then be marked conveniently, sometimes even by a computer, without the hassle of many months of continual observation by teachers.
However, traditional examinations are not the best means of assessing students in the majority of subjects. They require a student’s total knowledge of a subject to be assessed over a single event, which is itself an artificial construct, and requires enormous amounts of stress. The student needs to study for a long time to go into an exam hall and demonstrate a year’s worth of knowledge. This is unlikely to give a true representation of their expertise. Factors like anxiety can reduce their performance, as well as bad luck, sickness, and so on. It is far better to test a student’s knowledge over a longer period of time, in various ways, to get a more representative idea of their actual ability in that subject. This form of continuous assessment could give a far more reliable impression of what the student actually knows, rather than relying upon one single exam.
In conclusion, traditional examinations are not the best way of assessing students, and they should be replaced by continuous assessment as this is more effective and reliable.
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