感谢家人分享假期照片Thanking family member for holiday photos
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA7 / 9
感谢、迟写原因和邀请均清楚,工作压力与住宿安排相关;亲属信使用allow me和extend an invitation显得过于正式。
档位依据:7档要点覆盖成立;8档需更自然适当的家庭交流语气。
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your great hospitality
明确感谢招待。
I would like to extend an invitation for you to be my guest
亲属间措辞僵硬。
改进建议
- 用直接的来住我家邀请替代正式邀请声明。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
感谢、解释及邀请分段清楚;To begin with和Additionally显式列举,照片感谢重复,行文稍机械。
档位依据:逻辑清楚符合7档;8档需精简衔接。
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To begin with, allow me to express my gratitude.
过渡和内容重复预告。
Thanks again for your photos
末尾再次重复照片感谢。
改进建议
- 让照片勾起的回忆直接引出感谢,减少重复。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
frantically busy、hospitality和devoted to准确,有一定变化;please me greatly等与亲属语境不够协调。
档位依据:词汇有灵活性但语体不稳定,符合7档;8档需自然表达。
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frantically busy with work
准确描写忙碌。
it would please me greatly
对亲属显得过于正式。
改进建议
- 用I would love you to visit等自然亲切表达。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
完成时、原因和目的从句较准确,复杂句有变化;would please与if you can的条件搭配不够协调。
档位依据:复杂结构有一定准确性,符合7档;8档需更稳定条件表达。
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since the moment I came back to the office
时间范围与完成时相配。
it would please me greatly if you can come
宜用could统一条件语气。
改进建议
- 统一would和could的条件搭配。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
既有2026原书教学情境,未把信件虚构日期当考试日期。
Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stayed with a family member who has just sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your family member. In your letter:
- thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday
- explain why you didn't send a letter earlier
- invite your family member to come and stay with you
Dear John,
I hope things are going well. The reason I am writing is that I have just received the photos you sent.
To begin with, allow me to express my gratitude. The photographs reminded me of the good times and I wanted to thank you for the wonderful holiday and the photographs. I really appreciate the time you devoted to taking me around and your great hospitality.
I was not able to write to you earlier as I have been frantically busy with work since the moment I came back to the office. To be honest, I have to bring work home every day, so that I can finish it before the deadline.
Additionally, I would like to extend an invitation for you to be my guest. I remember you said that you needed a vacation and it would please me greatly if you can come to Thailand as there are many things I would like to show you. Of course, you must stay at our house during the vacation.
Thanks again for your photos and let me know if you decide to visit.
Best regards,
Tim
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